Intro sounds a little meandering, but once the drums kick
in it shows very interesting structure. Imaginative chord
progressions and some very good playing, but the time
changes are really the most impressive part of this track.
The levels seem extremely uneven though. The piano
sticks out way over top of the other instruments. I'd like to
hear better integration in the mix. This song is an
interesting mix of dance and art rock. I seem to recall
hearing a version that was longer that went more places,
and I liked that. Overall a solid effort.

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The musical make-up is here. The drums are definitely a
strong point, although there are a few hits that sound
mechanical. A varience in velocities will help that. A little
tweaking of some of the volumes, and a careful mix will
pull it all together, as some of the instruments are too
loud in the overall scheme of things. Nice changes, fills,
and melodies! Please develop the ending to a grande
finale!!!!

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