I'm very glad you tackled the issue. I what it needs is maybe some mellow melody to give it some body. I might have started with a fleshed out sound and then progressed to skinny to kind of portray Shaivo's starvation to death. Thanks for the bravery to make a statement, sorry for the low ratings you're getting, it deserves better.

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Thanks - you are right. It does need some development; the thinning and melody are good suggestions.

And, who cares about ratings anyway, as long as you have fun making music and you are more or less happy with the result?

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I'm looking to make more political cuts like this. The only
critique I have this one is the music is too loud. Let the
news reports dominate. But I look forward to more of your
political cuts. We need to jam Macjammers with these type
of political cuts--a good way to make some striking
commentary.

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