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This song was the first of 3 songs for my dad. Followed by "Must Be Me" and "Father's Prayer." This is a revised version, Jay's brother Matt joined in on this tune.
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Lyrics
Verse 1
We hold a candlelight vigil in a volcano
Singing our hymns to the gods below
Take a stab at this with a shot in the dark
I'm further from the truth
when you miss your mark

Too bad hand outs can't hold out hope
Stringing themselves with a soap on a rope
In a place like this, damned for a spark
I'm further from the truth
the closer you all are

Chorus
I've got a headline
Something that's fit to print
I've got a deadline
But I don't know if it lives

Verse 2
I've been living hand to mouth, hand over fist
I bite my own hands, I'm a masochist
I'm chomping at the bit where the tearing starts
She's a pretty one I hope she's skin starved

I'm begging you to steal on time borrowed
So you can teach me everything you know
I'm looking like you more everyday
And dad I can't see you or me this way, hey

Chorus
I've got a headline
Something that's fit to print
I've got a deadline
But I don't know if it lives

When all the days
Fall the same

Verse 3
Got a wolf pack pulling an empty cart
Through the frozen wasteland of my heart
They're pulling us apart on different sleighs
I watched them carry you away

When you went away my world fell apart
Put it back together with a broken heart
And truth sets free from all these chains
Lies take work make truth your slave, hey

Chorus
I've got a headline
Something that's fit to print
I've got a deadline
But I don't know if it lives
Song Stats
Hits: 1074
Comments: 2
Fans: 1
Plays: 68
Downloads: 71
Votes: 9
Uploaded: Mar 31, 2005 - 07:36:27 AM
Last Updated: Apr 16, 2005 - 05:15:03 PM Last Played: Jul 16, 2009 - 02:46:42 PM
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Hardware:
Emac, guitars, keys
Software:
GB 2
Comments
snowdragon said 1699 days ago (April 2nd, 2005)
nice tune
As a long-time newspapercreature, I was expecting
something different when I called this up. But I enjoyed it
nonetheless.
The vocal track might benefit from another go with some
phrasing variations (Too bad, handouts, . . . can't hold out
hope) and perhaps a revist of the harmony
on the line "Fall the same." Maybe, maybe not.
But overall, an enjoyable, catchy tune. 8-6-7-8

(BTW deadlines are addictive)
cheers
snow
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cjorgensen said 1698 days ago (April 2nd, 2005)
Don't like it. Heh!
Ok, I don't care for this song. Yet.

I rated it the highest I ever have rated a song here yet
though. Why? Because I think it's only fair. I could imagine
this song being played on the radio every 20 minutes. It's
catchy, poetic, and doesn't take itself seriously (mommy,
he ended his sentence in an adverb!)

Now, what I don't like, song is too good to be wasted.
Tighten it up a little, find something cooler than soap on a
rope. A candlelight vigil in a volcano is epic, man, so why
dumb this down? I can't tell where this song wants to be.
You go from coolness to stupid in seconds. Either take it
all the way to King Missal or keep it poetic. Even Ween
doesn't shake it up in the same song.

My personal reaction. Still think it's damn good. Wish I
liked it.

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