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Description:
Song about a broken-hearted guy who refuses to take back his cheating ex-girlfriend...
Lyrics:
U want this, u want this,
u want this...
Ohhh, u want this...
RAP:
I've lived and I've died, but without you I've tried
my love is not a toy, no victim to your ploy
so now you want back, you think my heart will crack
thought you hated this, now you want this...
GIRL, you said you loved me
We pledged our lives together
I gave you all that I could give
and nothing I asked of you
just your faithful love,
just your honesty
REFRAIN:
When will you really feel
like you mean what you say and what you do
please stop lying like it's all just a game
'cause when you play with my heart,
you take a part of my body and my soul
'cause you don't even know
that I would have sacrificed my all
'cause you want this
u want this...
RAP:
You cut me I bleed, your knife I don't need
when you wouldn't stay, you threw it all away
I realized what you did, and my heart is freed thought you hated this
Huh, now you want this!..
ONE day, you said it's over
you found another guy,
who built you another dream
but now, you say you want to come back (yeah, right)
'cause baby, you say you miss me
he didn't love you
as much as I loved you...
REFRAIN:
When will you really feel,
like you mean what you say and what you do
please stop lying like it's all just a game
'cause when you play with my heart,
you take a part of my body and my soul
'cause you don't even know
the hurt you've inflicted to my life
No, do you want this?
I gave you this...
YOU'RE so mean, and you don't feel,
and you don't care,
you slammed the door
walked away and turned no more
hey, are you listening to this
No, did u want this?
Did u want this?...
END CODA:
I never gave up on you
but why did you hurt me
I gave you all that I could give
and nothing I asked of you
just your faithful love,
just your honesty...Yeah!
Hardware:
iMac G5
MBox
keyboard
external mic
Software:
Garageband
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Definately poppy... &mdash 04/02/05 - 11:00:04 PM
Works well for the most part. You have a great voice. The
harmonies toward the end worked very well. Lyrics work
well. Maybe thicken up the percussion a little bit and add
some more instrumentation early on in the song just to
flesh it out again, but over all, it's a good tune. [ Reply to This ]
I think its great &mdash 09/29/05 - 11:10:16 AM
Well played , brilliant production .
Wish I could do it .
The lyrics I think are a bit weak, but the groove is the main thing here.
Overall I think its the kiddie. [ Reply to This ]
I think its great &mdash 09/29/05 - 10:45:38 PM
This song is bubblegum pop... so expectedly no profound lyrics here. It's
unabashedly shallow... but it's my friends' unanimous favorite for some reason.
You said it... must be the rhythm.
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The lion roars, the eagle soars. [ Reply to This ]
good but.. &mdash 01/26/06 - 01:10:20 PM
...i agree w/ Jgurner about the percussian, other than that it's all good. [ Reply to This ]
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harmonies toward the end worked very well. Lyrics work
well. Maybe thicken up the percussion a little bit and add
some more instrumentation early on in the song just to
flesh it out again, but over all, it's a good tune.
[ Reply to This ]