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This was the FIRST song I ever composed and also the first one I ever made in my Mac.
This song paved the way for higher musical learning... and indeed it is a steep path to get to that level of professional sound. It will be many years before I get there, if ever I will :-)
Hardware:
iMac G5
MBox
external mic and keyboard
Software:
Garageband
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Nice first effort &mdash 04/02/05 - 11:06:05 PM
You have a good feel for pop music. Like your other song I
listened to, this one could stand to be fellied out a little
with some thicker percussion and a little more
instrumentation in spots. You have a good voice, maybe
throw in a little more harmony. But overall the song works
well. [ Reply to This ]
nice tune &mdash 04/07/05 - 10:56:16 PM
Refreshing &mdash 07/25/05 - 06:16:41 PM
With that melody and guitar part this could have been a
totally bog standard pop song, but you've thrown in enough
surprising elements that make this a really fun little song.
What's mostly missing now is some solid bass. The texture is
a bit thin in places, mostly in the low frequencies. [ Reply to This ]
Refreshing &mdash 09/25/05 - 01:21:50 PM
Thanks, man. This was my first composition, so thanks for the tip. Appreciate
it.
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The lion roars, the eagle soars. [ Reply to This ]
MacJams radio serves up another winner! &mdash 06/07/07 - 01:58:30 PM
I might never have discovered this one if not for MJRadio... this is crisply-crafted pop the way it used to be, with a sense of really soaring at times.
Your first song, by the way, is lightyears beyond MY first. I remember trying to rhyme "Crankenhurst" with "liverwurst". Let's leave that one in the grave, shall we? [ Reply to This ]
Thanks! &mdash 06/12/07 - 09:57:05 PM
Haven't checked Macjams in a while so your remark came as a pleasant surprise. This song was like my "ugly" firstborn that I wanted to disown, because I thought it was terribly amateurish! After reading your comment, I felt love for this song all over again! Considering it was my first composition ever, it didn't sound that bad afterall, haha! You made my day. I gotta listen to Macjams radio, now that you told me. :-)
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The lion roars, the eagle soars. [ Reply to This ]
First one .... Well done &mdash 03/18/08 - 01:41:58 PM
You will get there ..... Just stay on the track.
By listening to your songs you have improved a lot. Your voice is in exellent shape now.
Hope somebody find you and you get a 'record' contract.
Best Regards Claus [ Reply to This ]
Wow!! &mdash 06/22/08 - 06:14:28 AM
Your first song you ever composed on your Mac I luuuuuve it !!
Leon your singing is superb. You got a great voice you have. LOL
Awee and I am the first to Fav your great work of art as well.
You Rock!!!. This is AMAZING
And I may add where I found your first little GEM too. Thank you my mate. :)
Peace Dee xx [ Reply to This ]
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listened to, this one could stand to be fellied out a little
with some thicker percussion and a little more
instrumentation in spots. You have a good voice, maybe
throw in a little more harmony. But overall the song works
well.
[ Reply to This ]