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When You Love (Demo) by obbster [Email]

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Hits: 1021
Comments: 4
Votes: 7
Plays: 121
Last Played: Jun 14, 2008 - 06:03:33 PM
Downloads: 66
Fans: 1
Uploaded: Apr 03, 2005 - 10:35:37 PM
Last Updated: Apr 03, 2005 - 06:47:50 PM
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Description:
wrote this song earlier today. Recorded it quickly. It doesnt feel finished yet - and it needs to be mixed better.

Lyrics:
i want you to know im not gone
i want you to feel you belong
you'l tire of the things you desire
to own
sometimes its better not to have known

when you love
try not to hate as much

we leave this earth all alone
with nothing but skin and bone
you've got to be cruel to be kind,
and strive for peace of mind...

When you love
try not to hate as much
when you love
ill watch from above

Hardware:
PowerMac G4 1Ghz, 768MB RAM, Keystation 49

Software:
Garageband 2.0, Amplitube, T-Racks
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Way Cool &mdash 04/04/05 - 01:03:57 AM
This is a great track, especially if you just knocked it out.

You should get a female vocalization behind this track.

"And the multicultural girls go, 'Do Do Do Do,"
The Simpsons.

Don't make it into a duet or anything, but if you have
some low level wordless harmonies (this the right term?)
in there, I think this piece would rule!

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Minor Quible &mdash 04/04/05 - 01:08:05 AM
A couple times either your breath hits the mic or the
levels peak. A $20 pop screen will take care of the first,
dropping the levels the second. Still like it a lot. Listened
enough to catch this third or fourth time through, so not
that big.

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Liking it! &mdash 04/04/05 - 06:41:40 PM
Cool stuff. I think what you have here is worth taking the
time to do it right. Mess with the mix... record the vocs
using a popscreen... do it up. Obbster- this song is pretty
good as it is but you have the capabilities to take this to
the next level! GO FOR IT!

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Hello Computer &mdash 04/05/05 - 11:04:12 AM
Do I hear some Radiohead influence?

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