Great update Obbster!

I REALLY like this song man, sends chills up the spine, I
think it is your best. Great voice and your best production
so far!

10's from me my friend.

MacJams needs more of this.

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Thanks a lot.

Your praise is most apreciated

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Obbster

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You have a wonderful voice, light and airy yet compelling,
with a wonderful smooth sense. The track cuts off in a
strange and seemingly unintended way, tho. (I'd like to
read your lyrics, too.) Good mix. Glad you let your vocals
be the centerpiece.

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Thanks a lot for your comments. That means a lot coming from you. :)



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Obbster

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...it is cut short suddenly on purpose? Kinda fitting
for the content of the song - contemplating suicide...
Anyway, I think you have a great voice and the lyrics
really cut to the heart. The guitar at the end was a
nice touch. The music elsewhere was just a little
plodding for me. Keep working on this one... you've
got a good song here.

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The song wasn't quite spossed to end so abrupt. well it was, but it wasnt (makes no sense lol). i was gonna have it end and u'd just hear the reverb from the instruments for a second and that was it. but i uploaded it without thinking lol.

Thanks for your comments.

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Obbster

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sound for MJs. You have a great song here. Very well
written. Deducted slightly for not including lyrics. I
enjoyed this one. Thx for sharing.

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This is a lovely tune, but why write a song about suicide?
(Not a rhetorical question.)

Well produced, but like Holiday of Fools, I have trouble
connecting with the empty lyrics. Just me.

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Both performance and production are excellent (minus
abrupt ending).
You have an very good, expressive singing voice.

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I really like Tom's comment.
I really like this tune, I think it has great melody with the
music and voice. Good voice, but lets hear some hope?
Your music to good to waste it on hopelessness.

It's just a matter of tweaking a few words here and there.

But I know when I was younger I got into kind of helpless
words, then I started writing fun novelty tunes just so I
wouldn't be so unhappy.
It is very easy to get into without questions.

Good luck with your well crafted talent!

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Well. I thought that the creative process was being "creative" and writing something that came from inside. Your saying that you like the song but you dislike the lack of hope - fine comment but the lack of hope is the song. thats what its about. its meant to lack hope. thats the purpose, the lyric. the reason.

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

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Obbster

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You really have a great voice, Obbs! This is a beautiful
song and performed with so much expression! Fantastic!

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Thank you :)

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Still my favorite song from you. Very chilling. And I really like your voice. The Far Away Boys dig yer tuneage.

-Cheers Bro-

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