Sun Stroke 2005

obbster

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This is a remixed and re-recorded version of my song Sun Stroke i uploaded last year. The vocals are a lot clearer than the earlier version and the mixing is better overall. Hope you like it.

(Update) - Ive added the lyrics now - i forgot the last time

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Lyrics

Ive Lost my place
Whats the point of it all?
You Try and Try
There are no answers

This life is a waste
Ive decided to leave this place
they're are no goodbyes
Theres Noone to leave behind
noone to grieve

I feel the warmth, the sun is burning
I try to hide
There is no shade
Nothing Changes anymore
even breathings too much like a chore

There is no shade
there is no shade

Song Stats

Hits: 1837
Comments: 14
Fans: 2
Plays: 237
Downloads: 86
Votes: 13
Uploaded: Apr 05, 2005 - 08:54:25 PM
Last Updated: Apr 06, 2005 - 03:08:04 PM Last Played: Jun 25, 2009 - 09:00:58 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

PowerMac G4 1Ghz, 768Mb Ram, Keystation 49

Software:

Garageband 2.0, Amplitube, T-Racks

Comments

ronnielong	ronnielong said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)
	WOW. Great update Obbster! I REALLY like this song man, sends chills up the spine, I think it is your best. Great voice and your best production so far! 10's from me my friend. MacJams needs more of this. Check out my latest song called ... How I learned to Love the Bomb

obbster	obbster said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)
	WOW. Thanks a lot. Your praise is most apreciated --- Obbster Check out my latest song called Legend

TobinMueller	TobinMueller said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)
	Airy high vocals work perfectly You have a wonderful voice, light and airy yet compelling, with a wonderful smooth sense. The track cuts off in a strange and seemingly unintended way, tho. (I'd like to read your lyrics, too.) Good mix. Glad you let your vocals be the centerpiece. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)

obbster	obbster said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)
	Airy high vocals work perfectly Thanks a lot for your comments. That means a lot coming from you. :) --- Obbster Check out my latest song called Legend

Stun Nutz

Stun Nutz said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)

About the ending...
...it is cut short suddenly on purpose? Kinda fitting
for the content of the song - contemplating suicide...
Anyway, I think you have a great voice and the lyrics
really cut to the heart. The guitar at the end was a
nice touch. The music elsewhere was just a little
plodding for me. Keep working on this one... you've
got a good song here.

Check out my latest song called Gossamer dissected

obbster	obbster said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)
	About the ending... The song wasn't quite spossed to end so abrupt. well it was, but it wasnt (makes no sense lol). i was gonna have it end and u'd just hear the reverb from the instruments for a second and that was it. but i uploaded it without thinking lol. Thanks for your comments. --- Obbster Check out my latest song called Legend

	said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)
	Unique... sound for MJs. You have a great song here. Very well written. Deducted slightly for not including lyrics. I enjoyed this one. Thx for sharing.

Tom Atwood	Tom Atwood said 1694 days ago (April 6th, 2005)
	Song without hope This is a lovely tune, but why write a song about suicide? (Not a rhetorical question.) Well produced, but like Holiday of Fools, I have trouble connecting with the empty lyrics. Just me. Check out my latest song called Keep Looking for Jesus (MJRF)

	said 1693 days ago (April 7th, 2005)
	Excellent Both performance and production are excellent (minus abrupt ending). You have an very good, expressive singing voice.

thetiler

thetiler said 1693 days ago (April 7th, 2005)

Tom makes a good point
I really like Tom's comment.
I really like this tune, I think it has great melody with the
music and voice. Good voice, but lets hear some hope?
Your music to good to waste it on hopelessness.

It's just a matter of tweaking a few words here and there.

But I know when I was younger I got into kind of helpless
words, then I started writing fun novelty tunes just so I
wouldn't be so unhappy.
It is very easy to get into without questions.

Good luck with your well crafted talent!

Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)

obbster

obbster said 1693 days ago (April 7th, 2005)

Tom makes a good point
Well. I thought that the creative process was being "creative" and writing something that came from inside. Your saying that you like the song but you dislike the lack of hope - fine comment but the lack of hope is the song. thats what its about. its meant to lack hope. thats the purpose, the lyric. the reason.

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

---
Obbster

Check out my latest song called Legend

aclarke	aclarke said 1682 days ago (April 18th, 2005)
	Excellent You really have a great voice, Obbs! This is a beautiful song and performed with so much expression! Fantastic! Check out my latest song called Ballad of The Little Tiki

obbster	obbster said 1682 days ago (April 18th, 2005)
	Excellent Thank you :) --- I Start everyday, with a Dickens Cider! Check out my latest song called Legend

The Far Away Boys	The Far Away Boys said 982 days ago (March 19th, 2007)
	:) Still my favorite song from you. Very chilling. And I really like your voice. The Far Away Boys dig yer tuneage. -Cheers Bro- Check out my latest song called Together on the Sand

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