Think this scored low out of the gate because it feels
dated. For a first attempt, I don't think it's too bad. Not
my cup though, so will refrain from voting, since I am not
sure what you were going for. The steel guitar bits and
the spy tracks 2/3 of the way through work more than the
open of the staccato stuff before the end. Pick a style,
seems too wandering.

Again, think you could have something going here, just
confused right now.

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Thanks for your comment!
Yes, I know this "song" is a bit way off, changing rythms and instruments etc.
but it was really my first song, on my first Mac.

And because of that, I like it - it's like it's my first born ;-)

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However, song not very cohesive, it doesn't sound like it's
progressing towards something or telling a story or
paricularly electronic-dancy :), it sounds like a sequence
of loops.

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Has got some good bits to it but I'm left not knowing what I've been listening to.

My first GB song was a bit like that, but so long as you enjoyed making it, that kinda all that matters

Keep going

DOC

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