Liked the melody, but I would have omitted/ chosen a different loop to come in half way through or even just lessened its volume. Also I perferred the clarity of the vocal in the second half. In some ways the overall reminded me of early live REM.
Your suffering wasn't in vain!!

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Hey Thanks!
I am now listening to "What's the frequency Kenneth" by R.E.M. I really
appreciate your generous comments. I also appreciate your comment on the
Intense Melody loop (i'm guessing). I'll see what I can do about it. I really
didn't like my vocal performance though. I have allergies, and it really
weakens my voice. Oh well. Thanks Again!!

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I like the song and the vocals are really nice. I think that
maybe you could develop the production a bit more to get
a bit more ambience. A really promising track though

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Thanks,
It was described as sounding as if somenone was in drug euphoria. I thought that was an interesting take on it. How would you suggest I add ambience? What would tickle your ears to make this track just right? Thanks for your input, and I hope to hear from you soon. Oh, and I will edit all of my entries after the contest is over anyway.

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NICE TUNES and the great dreamy vocal. nice i like it. keep
it up!

thanks for sharing

- Hawks

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I would like to personally thank you, WhiteHawks, for looking at so many of my songs and commenting so generously. It means the world to me to see that I'm producing material other people enjoy. Thanks!

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