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Outsider


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KAZOO

 Genre: Alternative Rock
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"the outsider"
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OUTSIDER

TEXT & MUSIC: JOHAN LONNBERG

Vers: I know a girl she has a hard time.
She`s so sad, she`s falling apart.

Never leaves the home.
she`s tired of being alone.


Ref: Everytime she`s doing something good.
They don`t belive it`s her.


Every time she has something to say.
The turn her down they do.

She`s an outsider.

Vers: Watching TV, a soap opera.
In her hand she has some candy.

Now It`s time to wake up.
Better times will come.


Ref II: Everytime she`s doing something good.
They don`t belive it`s her.

Every time she has something to say.
The turn her down they do.

She`s an outsider.



Song Stats
Hits: 761
Comments: 6
Fans: 0
Plays: 122
Downloads: 25
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Apr 13, 2005 - 01:35:07 PM
Last Updated: Apr 13, 2005 - 12:09:22 PM Last Played: Jul 27, 2009 - 02:53:45 AM
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Hardware:
M-audio firewire solo and a studio microphone, Mac G4 Powerbook 867mhz
And a Epiphone Les Paul standard
Software:
Garageband 2.0
Comments
TennesseeVic said 1689 days ago (April 13th, 2005)
Cool vocals
They go well with the subject matter.

The song as a whole could use slightly more variation, but
I like it anyway.

Can you make the ending a bit less abrupt?
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thetiler said 1689 days ago (April 13th, 2005)
wow
I like this tune alot. The ending would be nice to make it
more usual but of course your dealing with an outsider
and maybe that is kind of a turned down feeling.

But this tune is very special. I am sure that there are lots
of people that feel that way.

Your voice is very special, you have the sound in both
music and voice. I am going in for another listen. It is that
good.

This tune impresses me, so much so I guess I am kind of
wondering why you have those beginning notes. They
seem a little weak to me. I wouldn't normally say that, but
because I think the tune is so special. I think you should
make that intro a little tighter.

There seems to be a little static in the left speaker, if thats
the effect you want fine. You maybe a little more hip than
me. But the harmony is nice. Good words.

Hey, good luck with this!!!


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KAZOO said 1688 days ago (April 14th, 2005)
THX!
Thanks for your comments TennesseeVic & Thetiler. I`m
glad to hear that u like it. I though about changing the
ending 4000 times :) , but i`m not so much for fade outs.
I think i`m going to make a change at the intro at least
and maybe put some more tunes into the song.

/Johan
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jschultz76 said 1680 days ago (April 22nd, 2005)
maybe i'm weird...
...but i liked the quick ending. i thought it worked well with
the sounds/vocals/effects in this song. i would check for
clipping since, like thetiler said, there's static/distortion in
left speaker.
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bnaro said 1642 days ago (May 30th, 2005)
i hate these title fields.
This sounds like a good mix of Death Cab For Cutie and
The Apples in Stereo.

I'd like to see an extended version of this song.
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Schello said 1119 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
,-)
Quote Thetiler--->
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Hi everyone! My name is Johan. I`m a guy thats very founded of music. When i got my mac a half year ago, i started to use garageband and record some music. Since that day it`s been floating on really good. I hope you like my music... [see more]

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The terms alternative rock and alternative music[1] were coined in the early 1980s to describe punk rock-inspired music genres which didn't fit into the mainstream genres of the time. At times it was used as catch-all phrase for rock music from under

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