Would like to hear this thing developed into a longer
track. I love whats there, but could be taken much further.

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This is my first time hearing any of your songs--I have
been out of town.

This song is like a piece of tiny dynamite.

Excellent production, mix, vocal--and length. Perfect.
Welcome to MacJams.

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Your light sound, so ethereal, like prayer. This song has a
Cat Stevens / Donavon feel that makes it seem so true,
even tho the words are wonderfully over-generalized. It
could mean so many things, could even be cynical and
helpless, could be hopeful and courageous. Wonderful
poetry; wonderful opening music. Perfect simplicity. The
light buzz in the right ear is perfect, your playing is exact
and so supportive. That bass entrance is great, and the
layers of sounds so good. Consider cutting the sounds of
you moving to turn off the recording at the end...
even tho it gives the piece a sense of performed craft
that, in an odd poetic way, undermines what you just sang
(or perhaps I am reading in too much). Again, a masterful
fusion of poetry, performance and music.

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Music like this is my chemical.

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Short and sweet...

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this is the perfect song. the melody is beyond beautiful, the lyrics aren't
sappy, the instrumentaion is sparse yet inviting. This is music at it's most
creative and direct. I wish this was so much longer. i wish you were in my
band. i really do. I hear this song with reverb on the master track. Like
you were singing this in a medieval church.


Perfect 10's

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