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| juedm said 1652 days ago (May 17th, 2005) | |
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I Think Gud SEZ: I am under a heap of kisses the dark shed of heap skin of kisses I don't wish to share them because they are cold chilled and tart as pine-apple I am under this quilt of forgotten kisses At first it seemed I was unable to move but now I realize I am hiding 'because I've grown used to this fate of lonely nights Where it's just me eating my own fruit only just because Only for this reason to have there be one solitary point of treason making love again the blanket it's dark chain-mail of old romance inter-woven, inter-locked as the kisses themselves used to be but now tied only to the thing we're calling a distant and grey memory like the sea-foam in December just before the storm when dew was all of that sand and perhaps I should climb out and find something Hot and worth-while to touch Check out my latest song called Take #5
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| chikoppi said 1589 days ago (July 19th, 2005) | |
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One solitary point of treason I just now noticed this was uploaded. Missed it the first time around. Outstanding verse. Whenever I watch "Russell Simmon's Def Poetry" on HBO I half expect to see you announced to walk out on stage. I liked the backing synths and the selective echo. This one is sort of short and sweet. I felt the last note was a bit abrupt. I'd like to hear a long, drawn out echo of it as the words and meanings still swirl around in the listener's head. Check out my latest song called Loop It or Lose It 9
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Tom Atwood
This is such a cool piece. Wonderful rendition. I like the
echo, except...I lost some of the words. If you would post
the lyrics, that issue would be eliminated. Again, I love the
images in this, and the sense of regret & hope.