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(Not a) Worthy Fight by gorpie [Email]

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Last Played: Apr 14, 2008 - 10:02:21 AM
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Uploaded: Apr 17, 2005 - 10:28:03 AM
Last Updated: Apr 17, 2005 - 07:44:25 AM



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Description:
This song can best be summarized as "Falling out of love". That long process that we go through after being rejected by a person who doesn't come out and reject, but you can just sorta tell that they're never calling again.

Lyrics, Guitar, Bass, Keyboards - Boris
Vocals - Christine

Lyrics:
You came out of nowhere and turned my world around/And when I met you I felt like my feet were off the ground/Icy and cool, and so full of mystery/It's just a shame that from your side there was nothing there for me/

Chorus: Never have I felt so broken down and alone/Never have I spent so long just waiting by the phone/I know I should leave it be and save myself some pride/It's not a worthy fight to fight

Your charm has taken over me. I can't control myself/I think about you all day long leaving my life on a shelf/I'm kicking screaming begging God to make you feel the same/But deep insdie I know that my effort is in vain.

Chorus

Your walk is light as air, and your talk is smooth as ice/You tell me that you're into this, but you're just being nice/And in the end I know that your words will come and go/I know what I'm in for, and I can't help feeling low.

Chorus

Hardware:
iBook G4

Software:
GarageBand
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Solid mono demo &mdash 04/18/05 - 01:27:03 PM
Christine, you have a very nice pop voice. One suggestion
for doubling your vocals: use a stereo pan to separate the
different tracks, otherwise it sounds phased. If you put
your main vocal straight down the middle, which makes
sense, then the doubling vocals should be slightly left
and/or right. I would suggest that you keep the chorus
lead in the middle and add 2 new tracks (L-R) of doubling,
if this is what you want. Putting slightly more reverb on
the chorus doubles will help separate the voices too. Very
solid songwriting.

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Solid mono demo &mdash 04/19/05 - 06:45:06 PM
Thanks for the feedback! We'll certainly try that on our next song. We're just in the beginning phases of figuring out how to improve vocal qualities.

Thanks Again!

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great work you guys &mdash 04/20/05 - 08:55:22 AM
Coming along, coming along. I feel this is your most
polished, most produced sounding song so far. It feels
'professional' to me.
I like the xylophone or similarly sounding instrument in
the beginning and when that and the bass come in, it
sounds very nice...
Good work.

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great work you guys &mdash 04/20/05 - 05:36:42 PM
Thanks DC. It's inspiring words like yours that keep this love train rolling. We finally got a mic which is really helping the pick up of acoustic guitar and vocals.

When are we going to hear something from you?
-Gorpie

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