There are too many dillwads who think speed is more
important than melodic content. Your lead is expressive
and not ostentatious....but....it's mixed kind of far down.
I'd have liked to had it more in my face.

Lose the title. The song does rock but the title doesn't. If
you're not going to do vocals, call it "Hunting in Zanzibar"
or something and let the listener bring a trip to it.

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Agree with Alan on the melodic content... in part because I
can't play fast. You should make the lead more present in
the mix.

This is a good driving rock and roll tune that could stand
to be longer. Sweet hard rock guitar tones- and we need
more of this on MacJams!

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