I really liked your intro and the bass. I was thinking to myself...all this needs is some vocals, then they kicked in. This is only my opinion, but the vocals needed to be picked up a notch, have layers or something, to have some added interest. Her voice is very nice..I guess what I am saying is I wanted more. I could also hear some more elaborate piano. The production is clean and the song has a great deal of potential. I hope that my 2 cents helps. I think you can make this song even better. By the way, your picture is breathtaking!

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Thanks for your comments always appreciated from someone so talented. I
will hopefully develop the track some more.

Cheers

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and Cool tune. The voice is very good - reminds me of a
restrained Nona Hendryx. Is the vocal live or is it
memorex? ;) If she is someone you know, I'd love to hear
her let loose.

The song seems to me to be building and circling slowly
to a climax that never really comes.

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The vocal is a sample, wish I know someone too with a voice so good.
Listening to the song back I understand what you mean about the structure, I
hopefully will develop it so more.

Thanks for the comment much appreciated again from someone with so
much talent.

Just listened to Arabesk (Like it).

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