Can I Keep You

Hayley Deakin

Genre: Alternative Rock

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Description

I recently split with my boyfriend of 5 years, I had been with him since I was 18, so this song expresses how I feel

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Lyrics

Now that your here
Your all I ever wanted
Nothing to fear
Its all I want from you
Ive been here waiting
For such a long time
Could you forgive me

Can I keep you
Feel you in my arms once more
Can I hold on to
Memories that feel so torn
Feel Safe
Take Care
Never feel like
You are not here

Something quite like this
Doesnt come very often
Grasp it if you can
Because I want you to
Standing here watching
I think a million thoughts
Use your initiative

Can I keep you
Feel you in my arms once more
Can I hold on to
Memories that feel so torn
Feel Safe
Take Care
Never feel like
You are not here

Bridge???

Can I keep you
Feel you in my arms once more
Can I hold on to
Memories that feel so torn
Feel Safe
Take Care
Never feel like
You are not here

Song Stats

Hits: 1724
Comments: 4
Fans: 3
Plays: 179
Downloads: 83
Votes: 6
Uploaded: Apr 18, 2005 - 03:47:55 PM
Last Updated: Apr 18, 2005 - 03:20:00 PM Last Played: Nov 15, 2009 - 04:11:35 PM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

Just my G4 Powerbook

Software:

GarageBand Version 1

Comments

Kevensor	Kevensor said 1681 days ago (April 20th, 2005)
	Welcome! Nicely done! I liked the intro and the use of harmonies throughout. Great composition and production! Check out my latest song called Smoove

said 1681 days ago (April 20th, 2005)

This song...
is quite upbeat considering the subject. I enjoyed the driving feel, synth and timing. This is the first song of yours I've listened to. Love the bridge and vocal variations. Love the writing. I'll be checking out more of your songs over the next few days. I hope you have some slow material in your collection. I think your voice would be showcased more by a soft ballad. Thx for sharing this one.

ka-klick

ka-klick said 1677 days ago (April 23rd, 2005)

Almost there
I'd like to hear you with a real mic sometime, though it
always amazes me how good a mac built in mic is. Very
nice tune and use of harmony parts - it keeps reminding
me of some of my fav singers, so you're doing well. There
are a couple times I'd like to see you stretch it a bit more
- go out on a limb just a bit farther, you approach it here,
but pull back a bit just at the last moment. Let go a bit
more and you'll be a force to be reckoned with.

Check out my latest song called Big Bad World - Live 1-16-2009 plus - MJRF

virtualruffy

virtualruffy said 1671 days ago (April 29th, 2005)

steamy
You ought to reclassify this as dance. It has the sultry, slithery feel of a heated dance number, a tango or something similiar. It would go well in a movie for a passionate dance sequence. Kind of had a nice zesty Shakira feel to it as well.
I noticed that I really had to turn my volume up to reach normal levels though. The same volume level that would be blasting the room with any other songs comes out only as normal level.

Check out my latest song called no sanctuary

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Artist Info

Name: Hayley Deakin

Im 23 blonde and single, what more could you ask for?... [see more]

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Genre Info

The terms alternative rock and alternative music[1] were coined in the early 1980s to describe punk rock-inspired music genres which didn't fit into the mainstream genres of the time. At times it was used as catch-all phrase for rock music from under

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