You have a bit of a Tori Amos sound going there. I could
have done w/ about half the intro material (you might try
halving the number of rep's each loop has). Some folks
may diss you for use of some pretty recognizable loops,
but I thought you did a nice job putting a mood together.
I really would trim down the beginning a bit and cut to the
meat of the song. You have a lovely voice and I want to
get to that sooner. Very nice for a "warm-up".

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Unusual combination of sounds which work suprisingly well together. It becomes almost a different tune when the piano comes into play and that kind of clashes. You have a great voice but its almost hidden. I recomend a remix increasing the volume of your voice track. I would love to hear an increase of the breathy vocals (when you first start) additionally placed earlier in the song. All in all I like it, its catchy

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