With and without harmonies. It's a pretty abrubt end, and
what I was waiting for structurally from the song — I am a
creature of the pop music world unfortunately — was it to
kick up a bit and then settle back down. Maybe consider
on that second verse changing up the drums and bringing
it to the fore a bit more, to change the pace and feel of it,
make it a bit more pounding and frentic. Seems like that
would go along well with the lyrics. Then maybe settle
back to the beginning with the last chorus.

It's a nice song, but your voice really makes the thing
work. Liked the whole thing as a result.

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You have a good voice and interesting ideas. The mix is
lacking in many areas as the backdrop is begging for a
supportive role. Rhythm section levels upped with added
bass would make the listener "feel" the song....just a few
suggestions from an audiophile.

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Awsome vocals! If you ever want some real guitars Ide more than happy to give it a shot.

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always good to hear something from you-nice voice/good
melodies-everything is nice and solid here--there were
some production criticisms that other posts mentioned,
but you know what you're doing--sounds like you might
be sympathetic to the frou frou/imogen heap/butterfly
boucher style-keep em comin' and thanks for this!

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I really like this track! Great job!

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I'd classify it more as pop/dance than indie/alt. great work!

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Amos sound! I am a huge Tori fan and her work is very eclectic and rarely stays on a path. I really like your sound and originallity! Excellent.

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Excellent vocal harmonies and song structure. Beautiful
voice and nice lyrics. More bass or low end might be nice.
Overall nice job! I can picture some funky Madonna dance
moves along with tis song.

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