Lovely jangly guitar sound, and a good solid heartfelt
song. I particularly like the chorus, which has a kind
of retro sound to it. Very nicely done.

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thank you for the kind feedback, rebsie! it is very much appreciated! i'm
happy you liked it!

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Like the tune.
You do a very good delivering the tune.
Nice chorus.Almost like a Lennon tune with that high
vocal.


Thanks

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Got a serious Stones vibe going on here.

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Open strains of music and first line reminded me of "I
Shall Be Released" by The Band. Nothing wrong with that...
great band and great song.

What was the high pitched noise througout? That was the
only thing that bothered me. Musically a very good tune!

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As Mungo mentioned a slight Stones vibe.
Love the high vocal. Nice song and sweeping melody.
I really like the breakdown, Rock on!

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wow! to be considered in the company of lennon, the band, and the stones
means the song doesn't at least svck! hehe

i appreciate all your feedback. i don't really know much by the band, except
for "cripple creek." and as for the stones, well, the chord structure is similar
to "angie," so it's not surprising that there's a noted vibe there.

but to my own credit, this is one song where i tried to break some patterns. i
tried using two vocal approaches in one song, which i think could ruin a song
sometimes. i think it was "epic" by faith no more that got me to think in that
direction.

anyhow, i apologize for the "humm" running through the song... it was
recorded prior to purchasing an m-audio pre amp, when i had a whole lot of
hiss and humm issues.

again, i'm humbled and grateful to you all for checking this out and leaving
feedback... thank you!!!

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Driving tune! You got a magical quality about your songs.
I like how you have a number of different singing voices.
Parts which you use here sounds so much like John
Lennon. Thanks for posting

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tune.
I found the melody really well suited to the lyrics.
The differing vocal styles certainly added to the
enjoyment.
thanks for sharing

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One thing that makes this a good song to me is that it
keeps your interest throughout. Well....ok. So i'm a sucker
for the jangly guitar to begin with, but all the other
elements and vocal treatment make it usual and
interesting.

Well done.

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Do you know "The Debris" from Ronnie Lane (The Faces)?
Listen to it some day (it has great mandoline arrangements).
It has the same honest approach as your song here and your
song reminds me a lot of Ronnie Lane's. (here's another one
of the legends, except he's been totally forgotten) You
should lift it up productionwise though, this tune deserves it.
(I will upload it at http://homepage.mac.com/logoz
in a "Boris"folder, but be patient, I have a job)

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and they said that nobody wrote them any more! delicious! thank you x

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Sounds like Lenon on the high vocal. Very good!
I'm feeling real good listening to this tune.
I dig it..

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