Genre: Pop (mainstream)
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Based on the feedback I got from the good folks here at MacJams I decided to give it another go. Hopefully the vocals should be clearer now. I also reworked some of the start / stops. I especially like the one where the bass kicks twice after "You look like a question mark".I also gave the psychedelic guitars a bit more boost (Angelo's excellent add-on track that got a bit lost in the original mix of the song) and moved the (almost inaudible) Can I Turn Now-sample from the beginning to between verse number one and the chorus. I think it's a more refined track and a good excersise for perfecting the original track when I get back to Norway next month. Stay tuned! Lyrics:
I went too far into something weirdcan I turn now? I seconded guessed I guess I wanna shine like I always do when I'm happy now I'm a fucking mess Don't wanna tell you I'm sorry when I'm not sorry You trivialize my pain If I'm not pleasant enough to you it's a pity Believe me I’m not the same If my battle is inside I have to hide 'cause I know you never learn the deeper meaning Wish I was a child again I knew my world back then All I think about is how can I turn now I went along with the things I feared that would hurt me to hide that I was afraid You came along at a bad time wishing to change me My plans were already made And now I see it's a lot to ask of somebody You look like a question mark 'cause when you see my bright skin and my shining eyes you'd never think that I was this dark But my battle is inside I'll have to hide 'cause I know you'll never learn the deeper meaning Wish I was a child again I knew my world back then All I think about is how can I turn now Wish I was a child again I knew my world back then All I think about is how can I turn can I turn now I went to far into something weird can I turn now (I went too far into something weird) I went to far into something weird can I turn now (I went too far into something weird, can I turn now?) Hardware:
PowerBook 17"Software:
GarageBand 2.0 |
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You must be registered and logged-in to comment. Woo Hoo &mdash 04/21/05 - 03:36:46 PM
Woo Hoo &mdash 04/21/05 - 08:24:08 PM
Fantastic! &mdash 04/21/05 - 08:23:04 PM
Fantastic! &mdash 04/21/05 - 08:27:41 PM
It plays &mdash 04/21/05 - 08:47:08 PM
It plays &mdash 04/22/05 - 12:01:29 AM
Ditto! &mdash 04/21/05 - 11:15:49 PM
"Just another manic depressive Monday"? &mdash 04/22/05 - 01:27:49 AM
"Just another manic depressive Monday"? &mdash 04/22/05 - 03:44:05 AM
Stop/start!!! &mdash 04/22/05 - 08:10:47 AM
Yes Yes Yes! &mdash 04/22/05 - 09:58:48 AM
That's it &mdash 04/22/05 - 11:11:58 AM
killer tune &mdash 04/22/05 - 11:59:06 PM
Much cleaner, stronger &mdash 04/23/05 - 01:54:13 PM
Stuck in my head... &mdash 04/23/05 - 03:14:55 PM
slammin' &mdash 04/24/05 - 10:29:06 PM
steve &mdash 04/25/05 - 05:19:29 PM
Kickin'! &mdash 04/25/05 - 09:40:15 PM
Smoothed out and &mdash 04/27/05 - 01:23:30 PM
in strange way... &mdash 07/08/05 - 10:40:06 AM
You guys are champs &mdash 10/19/05 - 10:42:57 PM
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Good catchy melody with some great perc coming in.
Impressive mix and production here
SlimGirlFat
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