I like how this arrangement and melody works with Trent's
vocals. It gives the song a much more thoughtful and
introspective feel. The original is more about the rage.
This one is more like he's really asking a serious question
of himself and really thinking about the answer. Very nice
job. I think you could build the music more in the end
section as his singing becomes more emphatic.

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where did you get a track of only Trent?

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This composition of this song is more introspective. However, I didn't like the bongos. I think they distract from the music rather than enhance it.

I did like this interpretation very much, bongos aside.

well done!

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You know, at the begining i was confused about the beat. I was thinking
about not puting any kind of it. Not a drum, not a bongo... but at the end i
decided to put the bongos. But i still confused.

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I love that you can hear Trent sing. Nice isolation and
accompaniment. Agree about giving the build more
power, especially in the middle section climax. I kind of
like the end when he is more crazed and only the flute is
there to add to the layering. The concept of bongos is a
potentially cool one, but I think a real play would play
more cooled out on this track, less notes, let more space
happen. More poetry here, intimacy and introspection.
Very nice.

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This is one of the better versions of this song that I have
heard. Good job.

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