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my first garage band composition
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The forest is quiet. A rabbit appears. A wolf notices the rabbit. He stalks the rabbit. The chase is on. The rabbit thinks he gets away. He doesn't. The forest is quiet again.
My music teacher didn't like this song very much.
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Uploaded: Apr 24, 2005 - 08:37:08 PM
Last Updated: Apr 24, 2005 - 06:38:14 PM Last Played: Aug 03, 2009 - 07:32:34 PM
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Comments
mqmurphy said 1670 days ago (April 30th, 2005)
Loops?
I don't see a keyboard listed, didi you compose that with
loops? Interesting the way the drum time fights/works
with the keyboard. Nice sounds. Really good for a first
composition. Keep going.
The Dancing Wolf said 1608 days ago (July 2nd, 2005)
Loops?
Thank you. It's all loops
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Mystified said 1607 days ago (July 2nd, 2005)
cool....
Hey...I like this.

You've done a nice job of putting loops together to tell a
story. Especially nice is how you've used percussion and
pacing to cause a sense of urgency.

The entrance of the electric guitar (?) loop is a bit loud in
contrast to the rest of the production and it might be
better integrated into the musical line so it's not so jarring
and doesn't end so abuptly--but that's the only nitpick I
had.

Nice work!

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The Dancing Wolf said 1606 days ago (July 3rd, 2005)
cool....
Thank you Mystified. I'm doing another one.
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thetiler said 1606 days ago (July 3rd, 2005)
nice melody in there
Thanks for sharing
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The Dancing Wolf said 1606 days ago (July 3rd, 2005)
nice melody in there
Thank you thetiler. I like the way you tell a story with music.
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_nderscore said 1605 days ago (July 4th, 2005)
nice choice of instruments..
i like how you put this together & how it breaks into
miniature parts to express the story.. & how the electric
guitar paints the ending of poor mr. rabbit. you could play
around with panning to the left/right-might be a neat way to
convey the chase. nice tune
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The Dancing Wolf said 1601 days ago (July 9th, 2005)
nice choice of instruments..
Thank you _nderscore. I had to ask Dad what panning was. Now that I know
I'll use it a lot. thanks for the advice.
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said 1605 days ago (July 4th, 2005)
This is real nice...
You have a good sense of song.... this is enjoyable to
listen to. That is not an easy thing to accomplish, unless
you have some musical talent and you take the time to
work at a song. You obviously have the first and did the
second.

I hope to hear more from you.

Jack
The Dancing Wolf said 1601 days ago (July 9th, 2005)
This is real nice...
Thank you Dadai. Those were nice comments and I did do another one.
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JOAN said 1603 days ago (July 6th, 2005)
great sound and beat
this sounds really good wolf. very impressive first composition.keep it up!
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The Dancing Wolf said 1601 days ago (July 9th, 2005)
great sound and beat
Thank you Joan. I'm looking forward to your next song.
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DeputyDoofy said 1600 days ago (July 10th, 2005)
Very nice.
First composition and all loops? Mighty good stuff goin' on.
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