I don't see a keyboard listed, didi you compose that with
loops? Interesting the way the drum time fights/works
with the keyboard. Nice sounds. Really good for a first
composition. Keep going.

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Thank you. It's all loops

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Hey...I like this.

You've done a nice job of putting loops together to tell a
story. Especially nice is how you've used percussion and
pacing to cause a sense of urgency.

The entrance of the electric guitar (?) loop is a bit loud in
contrast to the rest of the production and it might be
better integrated into the musical line so it's not so jarring
and doesn't end so abuptly--but that's the only nitpick I
had.

Nice work!


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Thank you Mystified. I'm doing another one.

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Thanks for sharing

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Thank you thetiler. I like the way you tell a story with music.

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i like how you put this together & how it breaks into
miniature parts to express the story.. & how the electric
guitar paints the ending of poor mr. rabbit. you could play
around with panning to the left/right-might be a neat way to
convey the chase. nice tune

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Thank you _nderscore. I had to ask Dad what panning was. Now that I know
I'll use it a lot. thanks for the advice.

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You have a good sense of song.... this is enjoyable to
listen to. That is not an easy thing to accomplish, unless
you have some musical talent and you take the time to
work at a song. You obviously have the first and did the
second.

I hope to hear more from you.

Jack

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Thank you Dadai. Those were nice comments and I did do another one.

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this sounds really good wolf. very impressive first composition.keep it up!

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Thank you Joan. I'm looking forward to your next song.

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First composition and all loops? Mighty good stuff goin' on.

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