I am predisposed to liking female vocals, but I would like to hear you take the lead more in this song or just you alone. Other than that, the drums are too electronic sounding, maybe take them out. You might need real drums for this track, if you are going to keep them in.

You have a good voice, I look forward to hearing you sing more. Oh, and since I am typing this as I'm listening, the sax is a great addition.

Keep it up!



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Aww Thankyou very much
I will have more of my own songs up there soon with just me on vocals. Initially ime just after comments on my vocals as ime not a musician just yet.

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I am right along there with Kevinsor on the drums- for an
acoustic and melodic piece such as this, you simply can't
have a mechanical sounding drum backing.

The duet elements are lovely and I like the guitar-
country-strumming feel.

You both have lovely voices, and the sax is a great part of
the song- the whole composition is a bit reminiscent (in a
good way) of Sting for me.

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Thankyou for feedback on Duet work. I like songs with a mix of male and female voices. gives it a good balance.


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