Some seriously shabby performance and production BUT I
do like the song. I think you have something here worth
putting some real time and effort into. This has a lot of
potential. You have a good voice. I hope you'll keep
working on this one.

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i think this song had great potential! indeed, it sounds like
the production was rushed or perhaps not as well thought
out as it could be.

but underlying is a very cool rhythm and temp, and the
guitar work sounds nice.

so what am i trying to say? well, this version of the song
sounds like a rough, 1 or 2 track demo. my thought would
be to play this song through as much as possible, before
even considering recording it.

know the song inside and out, and present the vocals with
authority. right now, i couldn't really understand a word.

but again, i really liked what i heard underneath it all. i
hope you'll consider updating it at some point!

(ps, i didn't rate it. if you want me to i'd be happy to!)

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