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| thetiler said 1668 days ago (April 29th, 2005) | |
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Fun tune Thanks Mimi You might be on to something. I'll have to check. Thanks mimi for posting! --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| thetiler said 1668 days ago (April 29th, 2005) | |
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Sunshine Thanks for coming by and posting! Hey, thanks mungo for posting your stamp too :) --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| Doadars Uncle said 1668 days ago (April 29th, 2005) | |
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Good feel Bright, hopeful. Confident vocals. I like how you moved into your guitar solo. Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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| thetiler said 1668 days ago (April 29th, 2005) | |
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Good feel Thanks DU about the guitar, vocals. This is something a bit different than I've done in the post. With GB, it is fun to explore new territory :) Thanks so much for posting. --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| bronco said 1668 days ago (April 29th, 2005) | |
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Stronger vocals The lower octave worked well. Vocals sound much better, more real. Guitar rhythm seems to be standing out more also and sounds nice. I love the tambourine. I was telling my son that you could always tell a 60's pop song because it either had a Hammond B5 organ, a tambourine or both on it. If you ever redo this again my only suggestion would be to maybe soften up the lead guitar sound a little. Maybe more reverb and eq the treble down a little. Check out my latest song called Strange Feeling
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| thetiler said 1667 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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Stronger vocals I just uploaded a new one and I made the lead guitar softer. Thanks bronco for the input. I made the vocals stronger as well. --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| thetiler said 1667 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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Hey There... Consider it done jack. Thanks for stopping by Jack. --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| Mystified said 1668 days ago (April 29th, 2005) | |
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Retro-fun A fun tune, and well done! Really enjoyed the retro-feel of it. Do s'more like this, eh? :) Check out my latest song called Father Time
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| thetiler said 1667 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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Retro-fun Thanks Mystified for the encouragement! --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| Peter Greenstone said 1667 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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I like it. I like the new vocals. You have a great crooner voice. Maybe I should just accept it as part of the charm of the performance but it sounds like you're kind of just improvising the lyrics and vocal melodies and phasing, doing a little awkward catching up here and there. Though I really enjoy the song as is, I do think you could make it better by working out the phrasing of the lines better. Right now you sound like Harry Connick Jr, but as if he is distracted by something weird happening off stage and lost his place. This is a really fun song and I love your voice, but I'd like to hear the lead vocal part worked out better. Find a more consistant and catchy delivery for the chorus. One last nit: I'd use a lot less reverb on the picked guitar for this. Your usual reverb settings (or real room reverb) doesn't match with the rest of the Pop music. Great playing, but it sounds like it's in a totally different space than the rest of the music. Anyway, I like the song and it's really cool to hear you doing something so different. Check out my latest song called From Nothing
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| thetiler said 1666 days ago (May 1st, 2005) | |
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I like it. good point in version 3 I tried to make it abit more singin and not just working the vocals. I do struggle with the guitar lead in the middle, sometimes I think that it there is too much reverb then not enough. I feel a bit in limbo with that part. I guess just having more experience in mixing will help. Thanks for the input --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| Emily Rohm said 1665 days ago (May 1st, 2005) | |
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Fun. Very fun tune, Tiler. Good to hear you singin'. Check out my latest song called Monica's Waltz
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| thetiler said 1665 days ago (May 1st, 2005) | |
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Fun. Thanks Emily for stoppin by. Good luck with yer stuff too. --- The Tiler Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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MiMi
Tiler this is a fun tune to listen to. I wonder how making
copies of the vocal track and pitch shifting them to make
harmonies would sound. This tune is a nice change up for
you!