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| guitaraddict said 1669 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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Thanks Hey Ally, I appreciate your comments a lot...I"m always up for hearing feedback as opposed to just the votes. Feedback will actually help me improve. I totally agree about the distortion...I think I accidently doubled all the fill tracks of the drums, so basically every drumfill was full of flams. oops. Have a good one, and thanks again. --- ya know, music a great medium. Check out my latest song called Before All
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| SlimGirlFat said 1669 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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Lovely Intro Lots of lovely reverb going on, I like the change up very much. I agree that your levels are peaking and making some heavy distortion in my ears..LOl nothing a bit of tweaking won't change though. Some nifty guitar playing.. cool cool track SlimGirlFat Check out my latest song called Not Enough
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| Patman said 1668 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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I like it Ally-oop hit the problem right on the head. The bass is peaking out ( I have JBL and Bose speakers). If you flatten out just a little, iTuners can then readjust for their pref and systems. A solid composition, however. You should not denegrate yourself by saying a "Cliche" piece. Let your listeners decide for themselves. People will have their opinions regardless. A nice execution-High maks all around from me. Patman Check out my latest song called I've Had Better Days
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| Adisson10 said 1668 days ago (April 30th, 2005) | |
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Like this one alot. Nice sound and feel. Love the Intro1 Check out my latest song called Lost
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| Doadars Uncle said 1667 days ago (May 2nd, 2005) | |
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Aside from production issues it's a very nice composition. It does lend itself to vocals! Check out my latest song called Capitalist's Drag
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alley-oop
NIce journey from acoustic to rocking electric then a
combo of the 2. NIce builds. Great to add vocals.
Production wise, I think you're distorting is places,
especially in the drums. Check your levels. maybe bring
some bass down. When you export to itunes listen then to
get an idea of the production. Maybe go back at that point
and tweek your levels. Great tune!