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| axiopisty said 1663 days ago (May 3rd, 2005) | |
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nice i think the song is great i love the build up to distortion at the end maybe some riffage over that last chorus. but good work Check out my latest song called Free
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| dotwood said 1663 days ago (May 3rd, 2005) | |
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articulate chords I like the articulate chords. Very nice chords indeed. Your voice is very interesting, solid and perfect for this style. The song sounds like a potential winner. But there's work to do, you know that, and I'll bet you agree. By the way, I don't like the repeating bell-tone piano or whatever. Why not try a real whurlitzer instead? (elektrik piano © Native Instruments), it will enhance the arrangement (my opinion). Check out my latest song called Milk & Oranges
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| zendog said 1663 days ago (May 3rd, 2005) | |
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Lots of good stuff Good songwriting on this. I'd say drop some of the echo on your voice and bring it up more. The reoccuring loop — whatever the high pitched piano part — not to my tastes. Really liked the power chords at the end and the organ fill. Unexpected bit that added to the song. I would suggest letting the distorted guitar chords ring out completely. Overall it's a nice song. More than pretty good for a first go. Keep it up. Check out my latest song called Sold Out
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| eleveneyes said 1660 days ago (May 6th, 2005) | |
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i was here too wonderful song. re: the reoccuring high annoying bells which i believe are the upper register of an electric piano - i like 'em. that's the hook of this tune to me. re: vocal reverb/echo or whatever - i think they sound just fine the way they are. the reverb adds texture to the vox which sound pretty dominant in the mix to me. cool stuff. nice work. Check out my latest song called Here With You - Better MIX
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| jonx said 1660 days ago (May 7th, 2005) | |
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good stuff kinda bob mould-solid melody-keep on! Check out my latest song called september sky
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| Suzanne said 1657 days ago (May 9th, 2005) | |
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nice voice you have a voice that is radio ready. the high voice above you (you in falsetto?) and other aspects of the song seem somewhat out of tune. otherwise, this is a wonderful sound. that break toward the end, and the power you come out of it with was very cool. Check out my latest song called Rock The Baby With Voodoo (w/Tobin)
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| enterthefink said 1657 days ago (May 9th, 2005) | |
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nice voice thanks for the comments, the out of tune part is me, good ear, most people think it is a girl. I took all of the bass out of the vocal and added a bunch of crap and tried to be a little off key for whatever reason, didn't work out like it does for modest mouse or bright eyes. But oh well, thank you for listening and your input. Check out my latest song called Railroad
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| Macaudion said 1647 days ago (May 20th, 2005) | |
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I was here very nice work indeed... i really liked this one. the elec piano loop i thought took away from a grand sense of power displayed over all of the other arrangements to this piece. it could be that i've heard that loop too many times in gb, but you seem to be quite a bit more creative and of a much higher caliber... very nice work! cydniko Check out my latest song called 123 iGetU
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| Macaudion said 1647 days ago (May 20th, 2005) | |
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I was here very nice work indeed... i really liked this one. the elec piano loop i thought took away from a grand sense of power displayed over all of the other arrangements to this piece. it could be that i've heard that loop too many times in gb, but you seem to be quite a bit more creative and of a much higher caliber... very nice work! cydniko Check out my latest song called 123 iGetU
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| finkbassman said 1646 days ago (May 20th, 2005) | |
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Yeah Toast GO FORD but i like reach toohtbrushes and fruit of the loom much better |
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guitaraddict
Nicely done bro, I love the texture to this song...the lyrics are great as well, and I like how you stacked the male/female vocals. Acoustics sound really great, along with the lead and synth. Your distortion could be altered to sound a bit more powerful. I think the amount of reverb that you used on the vocals is making them sound a little less dominating than they could be, as they are very good and should be prominent. All in all, a great song...great work. Keep at it.