Do you like it? Any suggestions? Please comment and help me with a little feedback. Thanx-Patman

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I am starting to like effects like that in music. Sounds like a fun day at the pool.

The splashing adds flavor, this song I favor :) goes good the the music, adds a kind of zest for living. Maybe, you could add some cord changes or modulations but over all I thought the tune was fun to hear.

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I'd cut the water back a tad but other than that it works just fine. Would be good for one of those contemplative movie scenes where a guy walks down a beach wondering what he did wrong.

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I appreciate you folks taking the time to give me a listen! Patman

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This is a very strong music bed that seems to be drowned
in ambient sound effects. Not sure why. Consider cutting
the water and adding a lead or vocals?

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Thanx for the suggestion. I was wondering if the water was a tad
overpowering.
patman

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It's not too bad. Perhaps just lower its volume. But vocals would be a nice touch.

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yes, maybe limit the water thingy just to parts of the tune. but - as i said - it's really good stuff. cheers

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