I wanna be yours by CR
Genre: Rhythm and Blues
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Description:
This is guitar song that i wrote for a contestant on
"VH-1 DIVAS". The young lady didn't make the cut in the
ATLANTA,GA. try-out's.But the two songs i gave her were still
appreciated by her and her management team. This song comes
in at just 3:00 min., so it's perfect for radio,t.v., or movies.
I have the rights to this song, and plan on including it on my cd
"LOVE OPERETTA".
The song has a "INDIA IRIE" vibe.
almost like her song: (BROWN SKIN)
I patterned the song after Darius Rucker (Hootie and the blowfish).
So if any listeners are interested in this song or want to
get together on something, e-mail me at cecilreynolds49@aol.com
Thank you
CR
Song available on 8 song sampler:
http://cdbaby.com/cd/crmusic3
"VH-1 DIVAS". The young lady didn't make the cut in the
ATLANTA,GA. try-out's.But the two songs i gave her were still
appreciated by her and her management team. This song comes
in at just 3:00 min., so it's perfect for radio,t.v., or movies.
I have the rights to this song, and plan on including it on my cd
"LOVE OPERETTA".
The song has a "INDIA IRIE" vibe.
almost like her song: (BROWN SKIN)
I patterned the song after Darius Rucker (Hootie and the blowfish).
So if any listeners are interested in this song or want to
get together on something, e-mail me at cecilreynolds49@aol.com
Thank you
CR
Song available on 8 song sampler:
http://cdbaby.com/cd/crmusic3
Lyrics:
When i look at you, i see heaven,
i see eveything, that i love
And when i look at you, i see magic,
spellbinding, taking over me
But why can't you feel, the way i feel, and why can't you see , what i see
Bridge: I wanna be yours (i want you with me)
I wanna be yours ( can't you see, can't you see)
When i see your face, i see the sun
and the lights, ohh shining so brite,
all over on me.
And when you smile at me, i feel so-so good, like a man should, can't
you see
Why don't you, feel this way about me
why don't you, baby, see the things
i see, things i see
Chorus: I wanna be yours ( i want you with me)
I wanna be yours (i want the world to see)
(that) I wanna be yours
Bridge: Oh it's so tough to say these things, when i'am hurting,hurting inside
And ohh, it's tough to express myself, baby, when my feelings can't hide.
Verse: I wanna be, i wanna be, i wanna be yours, i wanna be yours
i wanna be, i wanna be, i wanna be
yours, i wanna be......yours
Ce'linda Publishing / bmi
Written by Cecil Reynolds
Hardware:
Fender guitarFender bass
Motif for strings
Programmed drums
Audio technica condenser mic
Software:
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dripping with talent and soul. Thx for sharing this song
here. Nobody has a voice like yers. Lyrics please.
CR
Thanks skipper,
I put the words in.
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Cecil Reynolds
soulful R & B. I love it. (as does Skipper). You've got
the goods in this song. Fine singing and just the
right easy motion rhythm. Nice song writing. I hope
to hear more. This is the kind of music I started out
playing in the sixties (tenor sax) ... very cool sound,
Cecil.
Jack
CR
Thanks Jack,
After the nice words, there is nothing more to say, but, Thank you.
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
Mr. S
i like it. thats all i can say.
CR
Hey Mr.S,
Thanks for the "sound" of approval.
Thank you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
aclarke
After about three notes. Cecil, you have an amazing
voice- keep bringing us these gems!
CR
Hey aclarke,
You are one of my "biggest" supporters,
and i really appreciate the positive vibe
you send my way.
Thanks
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
thetiler
Really enjoyed it.
Good going
thetiler
Really enjoyed it.
Good going
eleveneyes
your voice is fantastic. good song as well. i didn't feel the
instrumental performance was on par with the vocals
though. your voice is very expressive and dynamic and i
think the music could be even more expressive and
dynamic. I'd also check the intonation on your guitar,
sounded a little pitchy at times. I'm being real nit picky
here cuz this tune could be over the top! you gots lots of
talent Cecil. thanks for sharing.
eleveneyes
your voice is fantastic. good song as well. i didn't feel the
instrumental performance was on par with the vocals
though. your voice is very expressive and dynamic and i
think the music could be even more expressive and
dynamic. I'd also check the intonation on your guitar,
sounded a little pitchy at times. I'm being real nit picky
here cuz this tune could be over the top! you gots lots of
talent Cecil. thanks for sharing.
CR
Thanks for saying what you feel.
I appreciate the comments and respect
your feedback!
Thanks for the positve vibe
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
Peter Greenstone
I really love this. You have a great voice and way of using
it. The music is warm and full and sets a great mood.
Most R&B I hear these days turns me off, lacking in
sincerity and swimming in heavy gravy, but this song is a
pearl.
The ending seems oddly abrupt with a lot of dead air
after. I'm not sure if the ending was supposed to go on a
little longer and got cut accidentally early. I think the
track may be peaking a little bit. Other than that,
production sounds pretty tight.
A really nice listen.
CR
Hey Peter,
I really like the positve feedback, thanks.
I often post a "hot" song on the internet. Some
listeners say it comes across better ? The extra
space at the end is me not hitting " stop" fast
enough. I agree with your assessment about
" gravy " (over production). My era of singers
took a different approach to making records.
Once again, thanks for the listen. Maybe we can
work together on something one day!
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
bjack
and I love the song. Keep pumpin' em out like this. This
one's a keeper.
CR
Hey bjack,
Thanks for the warm words.
I really appreciate the love!
Thank you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
jgurner
Solid and soulful. You have a great voice. Kind of reminds me of Seal. Excellent sound. Thanks for sharing.
CR
Thanks,
I really appreciate the kind words.
Thanks
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
hammhock
Listen man, I think you need to get a band, an engineer,
and a label. Your voice and your song writing are that
good. Here's the thing, out of tune, repetative guitar
lines, cliche synth lines, and a lots of clipping parts
detract from what is obviously a wealth of talent. Properly
recorded, I could listen to you sing over and over. 9-6-8
-8.
CR
Hey Kris,
Thanks for the review and comments.
Appreciate the time and ear.
Thank you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
I prefer the older production style too - I think it let the
audience feel closer to the performer.
I hear the hotness in the recording, but it doesn't bother
me.
Your song is excellent and you have a beautiful voice.
CR
Thanks Mongo,
I grew up listening to vinyl records.
They were alway's "hot". I was already
set in my "sound" ways , when cd's came
about. So thanks for enjoying my style of
R&B.
Thank you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
fairy beth
....i am u HUGE fan of India Arie...so this song rubs very
well with me. What a gorgeous soul number...love the
husky vocals...good stuff.
CR
Thanks Fairy Beth,
I wrote this for a female. This is my
version. I would appreciate it, if you
took a stab at the song. You and several
other females on here can handle this
track.
Thank you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
White Hawks
this is a great pieace! thanks for sharing, i really enjoyed
listening to this song:)
again. this song is great!
- Hawks
CR
Thanks Hawks,
Appreciate the kind words.
Thank you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
Doadars Uncle
Great song!
CR
Thank you (Doug CN),
I really appreciate the fact you took
the time to say something positive.
Thank you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
stevel
This is really great stuff, awesome vocals and a top tune. I
do think the vocals and instruments seem to peak a bit at
times which is a little distracting. That is really a
production issue which could be sorted out faily easily..
The ending is a bit abrupt too. But hey what a
performance!
S
CR
Thanks stevel,
I will post a "hot" mp3 on-line at times.
Some listeners say it comes across better
on their computer speakers. I'am humbled
by your gracious words.
Thanks
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
eDrew
Good stuff. You definitely have a very expressive voice and
excellent tone. As mentioned in other posts if the musical
backing was up to the standard of the vocals you would
have a Gem here. Consider doing some Collabs with some
other musicians to give the musical tracks a Pro touch. If
you ever need some Keys on your track I%u2019m willing to
Collaborate. Thanks for sharing your Jam and welcome to
MacJams.
CR
Thanks eDrew,
And i'd like to take you up on that collab. offer.
Thanks
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
Macaudion
Hey C, I wish I knew more about this genre to be of more
constructive help to you. Certainly, you have a nice
following of fans of which I know, that they are in the
know, - so far as I can tell, I'm here to learn what I can
from you. I can tell that you've obviously put your heart
and soul into this piece and that it has required a great
deal of work. It must be a passion of yours because this, I
can hear. Keep doin it and congradulations! Cydniko
CR
That review/compliment is 'VERY' appreciated.
I need to bottle that type of sentiment for the 'rainy' days.
A sincere thank-you
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
Mystified
...this is pure gold. Wonderful track. Thank you.
Keep singin'!
CR
'PURE GOLD'
Sounds good to me!
Thanks mystified, that made my day!
CR
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Cecil Reynolds
ToozDzChild
Man, you've got a great voice. good solid song great production.