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Fallen Frame


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mrcjtm

 Genre: Emo
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I rerecorded this song finally, and i added a little bit musically. It should at least feel a little morethought out.
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Lyrics
I am the fallen frame in the hallway
a crooked leg in the morgue
im all thats haunting
pleasant, contrasting
warmly swimming to the deep end
slowly sinking
the flying thoughts come back again while i
think i might
come home

the curveless pitch returns come monday
with the weekend gone im loving more
and in every way prepared
the stars might shine through everyone but the earth
devours hearts
bleeding mouths without a mind to render false
and eyes running till they all turn red
slowly retreating
and look back again
to the south

carrying on
about needs and wants
ruptures spleens
and breaks up hearts
if there was one thing more
in this world the i abhor
its that you were nothing more
than what the cover told
me you were

i am coming to the end
of my wits
or what you might say
gets me through the days, the weeks, the months, the years
what little time
we hold, we share, we bought
we join, we split, we part
but still hold hands in the dark
just a little
taught

the days grow long
our hold grows strong
we wont have to do it alone
our hearts cant break
and our eyes wont tear
because we wont
forsake
our love this year
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Comments: 14
Fans: 1
Plays: 325
Downloads: 156
Votes: 14
Uploaded: Jun 28, 2005 - 10:02:05 AM
Last Updated: Jun 27, 2005 - 11:37:26 PM Last Played: Jul 01, 2019 - 10:45:06 PM
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Comments
fairy beth said 5200 days ago (June 28th, 2005)
great lyircs
really great lyrics. Love the guitar too...flows. I think you
could get some better vocals on this, but thats the only
area lacking. good song.
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Mr. S said 5200 days ago (June 28th, 2005)
gotta good feel on the guitar.
work on vocals. Take more time on them. Good turn out
to be really great. Reminded me a lil of acoustic stars like
Jack Johnson --minus the vocals. Good job.

Mr. S
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stevec said 5199 days ago (June 29th, 2005)
can't argue with them
Great guitar work & lyrics. Vocals could be better. Overall
nice work.
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stevel said 5198 days ago (June 30th, 2005)
Cool
I like this...reminds me of the Gobetween's Rober Forster
style vocals. Good tune, maybe slightly too long but a nice
loose performance feel to it
Cheers
S
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zendog said 5169 days ago (July 29th, 2005)
Nice to hear
You always had nice lyrics. You did this one well. Guitar
kinda reminds me of The Smiths. Glad you redid this one.
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said 5165 days ago (August 2nd, 2005)
Sing it
Wonderful lyrics. Superb guitar playing and reproduction.
A voice full of hurt. Honest, engaging, alive, even in this
moment of despair. Really good song layout. Lead in
instrumental break could be a little crisper and
louder...maybe stretch it out a little.
thoddi said 5162 days ago (August 5th, 2005)
Like the vox
Its like others have pointed out. Good song, good performance. The vox is very honest and for real. Not even sure if I would tweak any more reverb, because its cool as it is. Maybe it could be a good choice to make it even more naked. bring it up a bit and maybe a bit more talk'ish...

Keep it up! Good music:)
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ginz111 said 5157 days ago (August 9th, 2005)
Nice guitar
I really like the guitar. There are parts of this track where your voice sounds really great and then there are a few parts where it sounds less than desirable. Maybe try to exploit the good stuff a bit more. Nice melody and lyrics.
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donbot24 said 5157 days ago (August 10th, 2005)
Not my cupa tea
Great guitaring mate.
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bzmaru24 said 5144 days ago (August 23rd, 2005)
nice song
great song. love the lyrics. hope to hear more from you
mindscaper said 5124 days ago (September 11th, 2005)
yo
yeah gotta work a bit on vocals. already got it right in the
guitar :P
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said 5089 days ago (October 16th, 2005)
YES!
Can't wait to hear the new one with different vocals!
Emily Rohm said 5089 days ago (October 17th, 2005)
By the style of your vocals...
...I'm guessing you must be a Jeff Buckley fan. I like this song. Maybe
I'll download it and give the vocals a try. Nice work. Very honest.
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Sofian said 5038 days ago (December 7th, 2005)
Why not
Nice track, could put a little ironic touch with a satiric beat and funny and
high electric little sound here and there. Cool guitar composing.
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