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this song was wrote very quickly one night when me and my mate first got our digital workstation,dont know if anyone will like it as its our first attempt at recording digitally, any tips or advice would be helpfull thanx
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LYRICS TO COME
Song Stats
Hits: 4719
Comments: 15
Fans: 6
Plays: 614
Downloads: 585
Votes: 9
Uploaded: Aug 22, 2005 - 05:57:15 PM
Last Updated: Nov 08, 2017 - 01:03:16 PM Last Played: Apr 13, 2019 - 08:04:34 PM
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svenaxelson said 5050 days ago (August 22nd, 2005)
wow
that was amazing times infinity
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svenaxelson said 5050 days ago (August 22nd, 2005)
wow
that was amazing times infinity
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said 5050 days ago (August 22nd, 2005)
Magic
This is very, very good. Songwriting and performance as
good as the pros. Congrats on a fine first pass at digital
recording. With lyricism, grace and style like this, makes
me think you are professional analog people. Are you?
Been around the block a few hundred times? This has a
Simon and Garfunkel magic vibe. Excellent, excellent
guitar work. Sweet vocalizing. Wow.
ThroughRivers said 5049 days ago (August 23rd, 2005)
Magic
no not really,im only 23 so ihavent been around the block just yet i dont think, all i had before was this rubbish 4 tracker thingy ma bob, took me ages to work out how to use the new one, thanx for listenig much appriciated
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TobinMueller said 5049 days ago (August 23rd, 2005)
Painting pictures with voice and guitar
I really like the style you bring to your performance. Your
vocals match the guitar on this track in the right way.
Very cool unique sound, cool use of string harmonics and
delicate playing, nicely balanced introduction. I like vocal
doubling and the ahs. And I like the internal rhymes,
especially perfume and lurkin, and the phrase "glimpse of
temptations" which go well with the vocals bends you are
using. When you move into your chorus, your tempo
increases and your vocals aren't as tight, which sticks out
in my ears, and abruptly slows as the verse returns, which
could be smoother (like the ritardando you use into your
"glimpse of temptations" tag, which works well). The use
of the phrase "rock 'n roll", altho I dig the idea, isn't
reflected in the arrangement, and maybe you could add
something, like electric guitar, to an instrumental bridge
and to the ending vamp, to highlight this aspect of the
story; it might add a cool literal-metaphorical element.
Still, very compelling track. You are painting wonderful
moments of alienation and want with your voice and
guitar.
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jackstone said 5046 days ago (August 26th, 2005)
Beautiful tension
Your guitar works is amazing!
This is great work!
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Einarus said 5013 days ago (September 28th, 2005)
Wonderful
Excellent songwriting! Great chord progression and I really liked the
buildup. The lyrics are very good, as well.
Great performances!
Fav'ed, DL'ed!
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Matte Black said 4983 days ago (October 28th, 2005)
Harmony, Harmony, Harmony!
Immediately thought of "The Battle of Evermore" by Led Zepplin. Largely because of the vocals but even the guitars reminded me of the mandolin. Please don't think that is meant as a criticism. I'm gonna leave you alone after this post so you don't think you have a stalker! I'm just happy to find somebody out there who realizes that huge drums and feedback are NOT the answer to creative block. You obviously take this process very seriously and a lot of "musicians" could learn from that ethic.
Thanks again.

Matt
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MarkHolbrook said 3609 days ago (August 2nd, 2009)
Ya...
Man... first night with the gear and this... wow... You play like you were born with the guitar... Stunningly great...

The vocals were great but to be honest this could have continued as a guitar only piece and been just great.

Excellent all around!
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Char said 3475 days ago (December 14th, 2009)
I think you
have a gift. Good writing and playing. Keep going and I know you will bend these technical things to your will. Thanks.
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ThroughRivers said 3475 days ago (December 14th, 2009)
hey
thanks so much for the comment cheers
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crissew said 3475 days ago (December 14th, 2009)
How can there be so
many plays only 4 comments, lol. What is up with that? Very good job on this track. There are fluctuations in tempo accompanying a change in guitar part. The guitar part could be varied a bit more. Would like to have heard the theme you played in the intro repeated in the song again. Very well done vocals. Worlds better than my first recording. Great start, you are a natural. Good song!
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ThroughRivers said 3475 days ago (December 14th, 2009)
your bang on
we were going to re-record this one years ago, but it is so hard to go back to a song and re-record it, we know all about the tempo change,its awful hahah, but it was our first ever song we had written, thanks for the comment, yeah weird 364 plays 514 downloads??? and only a few comments? cheers
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Hickling_Stan said 3449 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Good starting point
Blimey if you had heard our first recorded efforts!! Not sure about the tempo change but still good. Bit miffed the finger picking is so close to one we are currently working on...nothing is completely original!
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