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Uploaded: Nov 15, 2005 - 06:10:19 PM
Last Updated: Nov 15, 2005 - 05:20:29 PM Last Played: Dec 22, 2018 - 11:15:37 PM
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screamalexz said 4971 days ago (November 15th, 2005)
3 songs?
this sounds like 3 seperate ideas thrown together. it started out with a nice heavy guitar part, and then the clean part through me off and then the added drum part right at the end. i liked the first two parts, but perhaps they should be seperated to different projects or better put together in the song. i think drums are in order, and some vocals. the electric guitar in the beggining was very good. and is the beggining of a great song.
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aivan said 4971 days ago (November 16th, 2005)
I really like both songs (or sketches, I'd say) you've posted, but they're just very good ideas which I'd like to see properly developed...

I'll keep an eye on you, definitely... :)
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Peter Greenstone said 4970 days ago (November 16th, 2005)
three ideas/songs?
They're not ideas or songs. This is just several different standard guitar
loops placed one after the other in the most utterly unimaginative way
possible. Give me a friggin' break.
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futzpucker said 4970 days ago (November 16th, 2005)
Much *too* rough to be submitted
It appears as though you have placed a loop, placed another one,
placed another one, and then submitted what you have as a song...

Such a process does not honor your own creativity, to which you
certainly have access, but which takes much more work than that to
develop. Nor does it honor the site on which you submitted this.

In deference to both your creativity and the integrity of the site, may I
suggest that you increase the effort you put into making music ten-
fold, listen with a critical ear to what you create, and work on the
aspects that you find need work, and then prepare to be dazzled by the

There is no doubt in my mind you can do better than this.
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armoguy94 said 4970 days ago (November 16th, 2005)
thanks for the critique.. next time ill try to do better :)
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