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I made this song so I could see how others could help improve this song. I'd like to hear your ideas on a name, genre, and how I could made this song better. I'd be happy to hear your insight! Thank you!
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Uploaded: Jan 06, 2006 - 08:50:11 AM
Last Updated: Jan 06, 2006 - 04:59:31 AM Last Played: Jun 30, 2019 - 05:12:48 PM
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Corporal Beef said 4972 days ago (January 6th, 2006)
FIrst off ,I would try writing and performing the song without loops. Then I would focus on two, maybe three parts of the piece and create a cohesive thought with it. Abandoning the loops may very well free your mind up to create soundscapes (and dare I say melodies) that could only come from your head. As it is, I feel the piece is too jumbled and is not clear on what it is trying to convey. I've listened to some of your other work, so I'm confident this piece will evolve into something stronger. Good luck.
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abstractreality said 4971 days ago (January 6th, 2006)
It's tricky for me to not use loops. However, I'll use the comments I find useful
for the next version. Thanks anyway!
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screamalexz said 4968 days ago (January 9th, 2006)
the loops are fine, maybe try and make them fit together a little better. it seems like it's alot of different ideas together, perhaps listen to it find an idea you like and try and base most the piece of that idea. maybe take another idea in here to put in the middle for a break. it seems to have the start of a few songs. but some great ideas.
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said 4942 days ago (February 4th, 2006)
I think you have to chance the genre to "Abstract/Experimental/FX"

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