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no more me anymore (demo)


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urbnite

 Genre: Acoustic Rock

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i was feeling quite stuck with a song i've been working on, so i stopped and wrote this instead. written and recorded in less than an hour. so don't expect too much.

felt the need to purge. thought some early-90s powerchord simplicity would help. excuse the blunders, i didn't really rehearse. just had to get something done in a short amount of time before the new cats went crazy outside the music room door.

but it's not that bad, so i'll share it with you. i feel like selters will like it! :)

oh, and i just realized it's valentine's day... so pretend i knew that already and think of it as a happy love song!
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Lyrics
you came walking into the room
my stomach flipped onto the floor
and i knew pretty soon
there'd be no more me anymore

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore

you pulled up, valet parked my heart
i'd been sitting there, broken since four
i should have known right from the start
there'd be no more me anymore

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore

the way you move me
the way you shake me
the way you move me
the way you shake me
down and down and down
into to the ground

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore

then you left me, quick as you came
i was just some stupid game
your twenty-two minutes of fame
now there's no more me anymore

no more me anymore
no more me anymore
no more me anymore
Song Stats
Hits: 3000
Comments: 25
Fans: 1
Plays: 114
Downloads: 43
Votes: 6
Uploaded: Feb 14, 2006 - 01:25:33 AM
Last Updated: Feb 16, 2006 - 06:18:17 PM Last Played: Jun 15, 2019 - 05:10:32 PM
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um. let's see. not that it matters because this is a one mic, one track song. but:

seagull
me

bluetube dp
luna

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Comments
macgalver said 4902 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
as is is good
to me. May I call you Neil Young? I really dig this song. I think it's
perfect. You've got a killer voice.--thanks for posting, kelli
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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
as is is good
thanks kelli -

you can call me whatever you'd like! well, within reason, maybe. :)
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drakonis said 4902 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
Lofidelityrelationship
Pretty good for a one-mic get-it-out song... I liked the lyrics the best,
and think this might be a good song to build the chords/backing on and
re-record. Definitely a lonely seagull song, but sometimes those are
necessary to sing.
ttfn,
Drakonis
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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
Lofidelityrelationship
thanks drak - yeah, it was quite necessary. and i think i did end up with something that can be built upon. we'll see if i get around to it, though. ha!
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caroline said 4902 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
at last - he has a voice!!!
great stuff darren - it gets better and better - happy love song? i think not but thanks for sharing xoxo

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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
at last - he has a voice!!!
who has a what?

seriously though - i mean thank you. ;)

happy love song? never thought of that... hmmm... maybe i'll try that again one day.

xoxox
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Einarus said 4902 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
Nice...
...especially considering this to be an hour's worth of work!
I look forward to hearing further versions of this.
Definately promising!
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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
Nice...
thanks ein - maybe i'll get around to making further versions of this... seems like it's calling for my electric. we'll see...
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outlier said 4902 days ago (February 14th, 2006)
good song to end a possible rut
sometimes when you're in a rut, and it seems like there's no way out, you
just come up with something that almost writes itself, and then all of a
sudden ... no rut. plus, i like this song! btw - not implying that you're in
a rut, just the comments about being stuck on a song rung true with me.
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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
good song to end a possible rut
it was a bit of a rut!

yeah - we all get stuck. i guess i was lucky enough to find a way out. ;)

thanks out!
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loyd vader said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
crazy horse???
killer voice dude.......love to hear this fully rocked out............
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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
cinnamon horse???
maybe i'll have to rock out then... if there's demand for it and all.

i love all these neil young references... i don't really listen to him, so i find it really interesting.

thanks mr. vader!
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selters said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
esy going!
I like this song! Because its not tight! Killer Chorus on this! It is subtle, but yet agressive! I can hear though that you are not doing a performance as blistering as i know you can, But i assume thats quite normal.. The first recording always has something special, but also some rough edges :). I love your voice, and im looking forward to hear this again1

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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
esy going!
thanks selters - i thought you'd appreciate the quick and dirty recording... i thought of you as i did it...

yeah, i'm sure i could do a better performance now that i've rehearsed the song - i didn't know if i even liked it when i recorded it... now i see that there's maybe potential in its simplicity, so maybe i'll redo it at some point.
Check out my latest song called Fall With Me
mandimonkee said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
...
For something your not given 100% to, it's great. love to hear what it sounds like when it's cleaned up
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urbnite said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
...
thanks mandi!

i'll let ya know if i rock it out.
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said 4901 days ago (February 15th, 2006)
A good song
Great playing and the voice fit well to this LOVE song.

Sincerely
----
Skean
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urbnite said 4900 days ago (February 16th, 2006)
A good song
LOVE song? what's that? i only write sad songs damnit! lol

nah, it's both!

thanks for the kind words skean
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cjhoose said 4900 days ago (February 16th, 2006)
great lyrics
They're like candy without the sweet and sugary. As always, guitar sounds
great.
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urbnite said 4900 days ago (February 17th, 2006)
great lyrics
mmmm... sour candy!

thanks cj!
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ChrisSly said 4900 days ago (February 16th, 2006)
Not Neil Young...
but David Byrne. All the way. If this is a demo, get the full version worked out, 'cause it's pretty cool and can only get better.
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urbnite said 4899 days ago (February 17th, 2006)
Not Neil Young...
i've gotten the david byrne reference before... interesting. ;)

yeah, maybe i'll do a real one... time will tell.
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Macaudion said 4865 days ago (March 24th, 2006)
Well
It's a treasure trove

Dion
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