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Invent Myself


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Moses

 Genre: Acoustic Rock

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Everyday I find someone,
Someone new,
Someone that I can compare,
Compare to you

I know exactly what I'm
Going to do,
I'm gonna keep you in my mind
Inventing you

You behave differently
Than I wish you did
But I still want you
And i don't know why

So instead of moving on
Changing to someone else
I'm gonna stick with you
And invent myself

I want you to be like her
And if you do
I know i'll hold on to
Hold on to you

I want you to be like me
And give yourself to me
Oh please
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Downloads: 107
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Uploaded: Feb 18, 2006 - 09:47:22 PM
Last Updated: Feb 16, 2006 - 08:47:08 PM Last Played: Jan 28, 2015 - 10:22:21 PM
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said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Nice work
You write well and have a fine singing voice. This is a well written, played,
sung and mixed piece. Three thumbs up.
Moses said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Nice work
Thanks Mr. Conductor!
Check out my latest song called The Grinch
said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Immediate approbation
Starts out sounding like an old Italian aria but quickly evolves to a
righteous rock groove. Very cool. Very intelligent and soulful. I'd like to
hear the soloing vox a little louder. Excellent singing. A complex yet
very accessible composition.
cjorgensen said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Ok, so...
Dug the opening. The beats don't seem to fit. And the lyrics are a bit
juvenile. Nothing wrong with lyrics though. I prefer honesty to flattery
or even artistry.

I thin if you effects the vocals a bit, get some real beats in there, and
you will actually have a song. I also think you can add some complexity
to the lyrics and you will be spot on.

This is a good song. Thematically it's what I write. But is she supposed
to be like a woman from your past, the ideal woman, or you?

Someone else pointed out how it is difficult to use loops, since you
have hi-fi recording, then do low-fi on top. I can see what he meant
with this song. The vocals are so much more raw and powerful than the
backdrop. 8, 6, 8, 7.

I like this type of singing, but seems like the chorus over-powers the
main vocals. You have a great start here. Good stuff.

Wasn't a waste of my time and I thank you for that.
Check out my latest song called Gardens
Moses said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Ok, so...
thanks for taking the time to give me some good advice
Check out my latest song called The Grinch
jayman said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Wow!
I really enjoyed what you have done here ... It's definately got a different
yet comfortable feel to it. A really great vibe, I love the vocals .. Wonderful
Job!!!
Check out my latest song called Alone
jayman said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Wow!
I really enjoyed what you have done here ... It's definately got a different
yet comfortable feel to it. A really great vibe, I love the vocals .. Wonderful
Job!!!
Check out my latest song called Alone
Moses said 4680 days ago (February 19th, 2006)
Wow!
thanks jayman!
Check out my latest song called The Grinch
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