Home Music Articles Forums Blog Chat More...      


Get Flash to see this player.

Fairly simple song which i will eventually write lyrics to but i will need to find a singer from somewhere... i wish i could sing :(

Its a fairly reflexive peice on my current situation which is my packing up and leaving everything i've come to care about behind... hmm cheery eh :)

Anyway let me know what you think / how i can improve etc please! Thanks, you're all awesome!
Leave a Comment
You must be registered and logged-in to comment.
Song Stats
Hits: 2141
Comments: 4
Fans: 0
Plays: 111
Downloads: 95
Votes: 0
Uploaded: May 07, 2006 - 06:24:03 AM
Last Updated: May 07, 2006 - 05:55:07 AM Last Played: Feb 27, 2019 - 01:05:10 PM
Song License
Creative Commons License:

Creative Commons

Song Actions
share on facebook share on twitter download song
krismacqueen said 4705 days ago (May 7th, 2006)
Needs a melody/musical theme
I know you mention this already, but this is clearly a backing track as
opposed to an instrumental piece. There isn't enough going on
melodically in your instrumental arrangement to keep the listener for
long. It'll be fine once you get some vocals together for it. You're clearly
quite the musician. Solid playing all around. It's difficult to comment on
song structure at this point. I'd suggest grabbing an acoustic guitar or
undistracting synth lead and noodling out a melody. It'd make a big
difference for the song, and give it the necessary structure to make it feel
like the song is going somewhere. I hope my comments haven't been to
obtuse to be useful.
Check out my latest song called Song for Rob
domdino said 4705 days ago (May 7th, 2006)
Needs a melody/musical theme
no i know what you mean its totally a backing track :) the melody/structure is coming :) thanks for the comments.

Check out my latest song called The RIse is Always Harder than the Fall Pt. 2
said 4704 days ago (May 8th, 2006)
Good track
This will be a good track for your song. Maybe add a tad more bass to
the line, and also maybe an acoustic guitar to set the feel at the beginning
before the soloist comes in with the good sounding solo! Sounds good,
hope to hear the final soon. God Bless.
domdino said 4703 days ago (May 9th, 2006)
Good track
Thanks man, yeah i realised just after i mixed it down that i'd totally neglected the bass! There isn't a bass in the whole song! :) oops
I'll get on that, thanks for the comments !

Check out my latest song called The RIse is Always Harder than the Fall Pt. 2
Fan List
Artist Info
artist photo
Name: Peter Franco
Location: New Mexico USA
send a note
I am, lost. Collaborations: Vanishing With Leon Forgotten With Arin & Saint Don't make me With Arin & Saint Cold Passion With Alannah ... [see more]

Check out some of my other songs:

Genre Info
Pop music is a music genre that developed from the mid-1950s as a softer alternative to rock 'n' roll and later to rock music. It has a focus on commercial recording, often orientated towards a youth market, usually through the medium of relatively s

More songs in Pop (mainstream):

Who's Online
Invisible Members: 0
Visitors: 91