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Last Night


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Gav

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Little tune I wrote the other day - a rough draft! Very Raw at the moment but I think its got potential.
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Uploaded: May 11, 2006 - 12:01:52 PM
Last Updated: May 11, 2006 - 12:01:52 PM Last Played: Dec 04, 2018 - 03:21:19 AM
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said 4601 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
Better than raw
Good vocals. Very clear and able to be heard well. Good guitar also.
Actually, this song sounds better than a rough draft by far. You sing well.
If you do add other "stuff", make sure not to lose this raw feeling that you
have in this recording. Good job.
Gav said 4601 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
Better than raw
Cheers Jsacker! I suppose its nice in its simplicity at the moment and if I do
add more its not going to be much - I reckon simple is best for this one!
thank again!
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Leon said 4601 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
Loved it.
I like the vocals on this song, raw and emotional and straightforward.
Your voice suits a rock/country or rock/alternative genre, I think. The
guitar playing is adequate, but as it is a rough take, it defintiely needs
just a little more polish. Still, it sounds great.

DL'd and fav'd!
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Gav said 4601 days ago (May 12th, 2006)
Loved it.
It sure does need more polishing - I suppose the general consensus so far from
you guys is that it sounds good enough as is which is great! And I agree in teh
polishing up bit - some lyrics are a bit rough cut and I could do a better take!
Thanks!
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Chase Alvins said 4601 days ago (May 11th, 2006)
Good
Add a shaker and/or tambourine... and faster tempo... maybe?
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Gav said 4601 days ago (May 12th, 2006)
Good
Yep - I reckon thats all the percussion it needs - not sure about the uping the
tempo. I'll give it a go!! Thanks
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HypnotiQ Sorcere said 4599 days ago (May 14th, 2006)
nicely done
what makes this song great is the vocals,
very warm,
the acoustic playing is a perfect compliment
to it and if you ask me
i think this is CD ready now lol
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HypnotiQ Sorcere said 4599 days ago (May 14th, 2006)
nicely done
what makes this song great is the vocals,
very warm,
the acoustic playing is a perfect compliment
to it and if you ask me
i think this is CD ready now lol
Check out my latest song called Games Without Frontiers (War Without Tears Remix
Gav said 4597 days ago (May 15th, 2006)
nicely done
Thanks very much! I would disagree with the CD ready bit though - there are
a few slip ups in it and though they might not stick out too much they do to
me. Its a bad habit of mine - re-doing stuff that is! Thanks for posting!
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jie said 4597 days ago (May 15th, 2006)
cool
nice arrangment. compiments your vocal well. leave it alone. its great the way it is. cheery
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Gav said 4597 days ago (May 15th, 2006)
cool
Thanks. Was lucky with this one - you know the kind of tune that just pops
out! Will try to leave it alone but I'll do another version and if that doesnt
work I'll stick with this -thank you! : )
Check out my latest song called Understand
composerclark said 4596 days ago (May 16th, 2006)
Very expressive
I know others have said this already, but your voice is absolutely
wonderful! Very personal, very expressive, and very much your own.
Nice lyrics, but maybe you could post them? I always like to read 'em
while I listen. Just a couple of issues: The guitar is a little out of tune,
and your voice goes slightly flat when it goes high on "walkin'" the first
time, a occasionally on high notes after that. Just try to stay "on top" of
the high notes, as singers have told me.

Beautiful song. You should be proud.
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Gav said 4596 days ago (May 16th, 2006)
Very expressive
Thank you fo rthe compliments. I can hear the pitch problems myself in the
song. I did each track in one take so they are the little shings I want to iron
out. I'll post lyrics to this soon! cheers composerclark!
Check out my latest song called Understand
ktb said 4596 days ago (May 16th, 2006)
sounds great
rough draft I'll take it. sounds fleshed out to me. has a very polished
appeal. you've a fine voice and the songcraft shows. its a rainy mellow
day here in NE, and this strikes me as just a nice compliment to the
days end. liked this a lot

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philonnie said 4596 days ago (May 16th, 2006)
Raw ....talent!
I'd just echo other comments that this is a really great song and your voice sounds superb. Keep it up!
cheers, phil
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BobRoberts said 4595 days ago (May 18th, 2006)
Great Track
I love the feeling of stumbling upon a gem like this. Great voice, lyrics,
delivery, chord progression. Thanks for sharing the rough draft.
Sounds great as is, but do what you gotta do. Vote, fav or comment?
All of the above. 10 in song writing, easily.
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TobinMueller said 4561 days ago (June 20th, 2006)
Potential is an understatement
"Potential" is an understatement. Your vulnerable voice is perfect for this
tune, and the simple sing-songwriter style as well. Consider posting your
lyrics, since it would help. If you consider changing anything, consider a
bridge that has more of an edge, something to make the lyrics grip more,
speak to a specific emotion or action or moment that really lifts the song
into the honest and unique category. Really nice song and presentation.
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jpfeiff said 4350 days ago (January 17th, 2007)
Man can you sing!
I love you voice. You say this is raw, but I kind of like the "sitting right in the living room" lo-fi feel of the simple strumming. With a voice like yours you can get away with it. I wouldn't recommend a whole album full of this format, but I also wouldn't recommend and album without at least one or two cuts just like this--you strumming guitar and singing your heart out.

Jim
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said 4312 days ago (February 24th, 2007)
WOW . . .
This is really a great one..
Your voice is SOOOO BEAUTIFUL . . . : )

I love the tempo & *The Raw* as You say in English
The slow-tempo gives it exactly the right feeling...: )
Possibly a shaker /tamburine could be added!
& The Lyrics ! I must say it again What a Voice You have...... sigh.......... so good . You should have cds on the market that's for sure! I'm just fortunate to be able to listen for free! THANKS ! ! !
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said 3939 days ago (March 3rd, 2008)
Great
Wow, what a voice... I really like it... And a good song/melody... You've really got something here.... Good feelings in this... It was a pleasure to listen to.....
saymme said 3939 days ago (March 3rd, 2008)
.....so great to hear You again...........
Missed Your Songs....I had to empty my computer loosing all the dl I had from Mj(hundreds) "I*M BACK AT YOUR DOOR* 8 ) GREAT LYRICS & REALLY GREAT SONGS YOU HAVE ! ! ! (!) Hope to hear some new ones eventually I've heard all of Yours... : )
tx so much means alot Hope U are OK : ) WELL : )
Helena
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