Home Music Articles Forums Blog Chat More...      

Death Together (Remix)


by

screamalexz

 Genre: Acoustic
No artwork

Get Flash to see this player.

Description
a remix of the original, i went and redid the vocals added a bit more to them, and did some more work on the production.
Leave a Comment
You must be registered and logged-in to comment.
Lyrics
you feel yourself fall
ground is moving closer
please don't cry at all
cling to me forever

sweetly death comes
do not be afraid
when our blood flows
our love will not be frayed

come kiss death
my lips to yours
we take our last breath
live within these last hours
Song Stats
Hits: 2916
Comments: 14
Fans: 0
Plays: 150
Downloads: 109
Votes: 4
Uploaded: May 15, 2006 - 03:24:11 PM
Last Updated: May 15, 2006 - 03:24:11 PM Last Played: Apr 12, 2019 - 02:01:24 PM
Song License
Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Creative Commons

Song Actions
share on facebook share on twitter download song
Hardware:
fender accoustic
Software:
audacity
Comments
gregd said 4873 days ago (May 16th, 2006)
I . . .
hear a bit of Elliot Smith in this song, and if you sound like him, you're
doing good work in my opinion. I like it, all in all, but the lyrics seem to
be a bit predictable. As far as the genre goes, it's a solid tune.

I heard one production issue at the end: the timing seemed to get off
between the vocals the guitar track. Maybe it was the feed, but that's
what I heard.

In peace,
Thelonious
Check out my latest song called 08nov08
screamalexz said 4873 days ago (May 16th, 2006)
I . . .
oh thanks for the elliot smith comment, at the end the guitar was fading out and the vocals didn't that may be why it sounded that way. thansk for the listen.

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
gregd said 4873 days ago (May 16th, 2006)
I . . .
hear a bit of Elliot Smith in this song, and if you sound like him, you're
doing good work in my opinion. I like it, all in all, but the lyrics seem to
be a bit predictable. As far as the genre goes, it's a solid tune.

I heard one production issue at the end: the timing seemed to get off
between the vocals the guitar track. Maybe it was the feed, but that's
what I heard.

In peace,
Thelonious
Check out my latest song called 08nov08
screamalexz said 4856 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
I . . .
oh yes, i think i know where the timing went off. i think i had gotten lost and didn't realize i was supposed to start singing right away. thanks for the feedback. thought i had replied to this comment a while ago guess i didn't.

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
said 4872 days ago (May 17th, 2006)
Chance encounter
Hey, glad I stumbled upon this. Chance, you have come a long way
since "Tear Away". Way to go. Moody Donovan kind of vibe. Song is
rather dark. Got anything happy to sing about? LOL. Keep on doing the
music thing. You got a bead on it now.
screamalexz said 4871 days ago (May 18th, 2006)
Chance encounter
hey, thanks for the comment. once i start recording my first album this summer i promise a happy song. i have a rather happy romantic tune i want to get recorded this summer. i have to make something fluffy for caroline too.

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
cjhoose said 4870 days ago (May 19th, 2006)
mellow
Amazing improvement since your previous songs, I agree with rschletty
on that. Sweet in a kind of haunting, despairing way.
Check out my latest song called Vapor
screamalexz said 4870 days ago (May 19th, 2006)
mellow
thanks, was what i was going for :)

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
selters said 4868 days ago (May 21st, 2006)
a lot better!
This is a lot better then the last one Chance. I remember your vocals were very blurry on the previous, this time they sound much clearer! Its nice!
Check out my latest song called Going South
screamalexz said 4868 days ago (May 21st, 2006)
a lot better!
thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed it. now, if i can only get a good set up and get my cd recorded..

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
mulli said 4866 days ago (May 23rd, 2006)
retro groovopolis
oy scream - nice job mate - retro as in - ever listen to any old sid barrett
tunes - "julia dream" was kinda where this took me -
i'm hearing an aweful lot of originality in this piece tho' & i toast you for
your darkest of heartfeltedness - keep it up, you & i, we're almost there,
almostly - -
mulli
Check out my latest song called Running out of Steem
screamalexz said 4866 days ago (May 23rd, 2006)
retro groovopolis
hey, thanks for the comment. haven't ever heard those bands. must check them out.

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
WRG said 4858 days ago (May 31st, 2006)
Death Together
Great song. A little thin in spots but quite nice.

William
Check out my latest song called She Calls My Name
screamalexz said 4856 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
Death Together
thanks for the comment, not sure what you mean by thin. do you mean the vocals?

---
Robert Smith lied, boys do cry
Check out my latest song called Broken Spirit
Fan List
Artist Info
artist photo
Name: Chance Motta
Location: Kirkland WA usa
send a note
Chance Motta was born in Seattle, Wa in 1988 and began playing any instrument he could find at the age of 13. Starting off with a taste for heavy and fast music such as bands like Greenday, Rancid, Anti-Flag, and other rock bands Chance saved up ... [see more]

Check out some of my other songs:

Chat
Who's Online
Invisible Members: 0
Visitors: 61
Links