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thunder and lightning


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teptep

 Genre: A Cappella

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a long time ago, someone skyped me, they inquired about my artistic and musical skills, I let them listen to some of the things I wrote out, and they liked it, so they asked me to help them come up with some lyrics about thunder and lighting well we worked on it, and no matter what I did he did not like it, ether way he never got back to me and the lyrics sat on my hardrive taking up space so instead of getting rid of them I decided to sing it myself.
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Lyrics
A storm is raging again tonight
outside of these four walls.
The lightening strikes aluminates the night as the thunder makes its call.

taken by the light
seems to blind my sight
my mind seems to blank
it is all around, you can hear the sound.
of the thunder and the light

the noise so loud I have to shout
to here myself think
mother nature seems to keep its call
and the rain seem to bring

the thunder and the lighting
the sound of all the rain brings
the thunder and the lighting.
the sound of all the rain brings

the clouds so dark, a pounding heart
lighting makes its strike.
I cringe in fear, but relize
it all apart of natures light.

the thunder and the lighting
the sound of all the rain brings
the thunder and the lighting.
the sound of all the rain brings
the thunder and the lighting
Song Stats
Hits: 4008
Comments: 32
Fans: 2
Plays: 433
Downloads: 170
Votes: 3
Uploaded: May 27, 2006 - 04:28:49 PM
Last Updated: May 30, 2006 - 05:41:33 PM Last Played: Apr 10, 2019 - 06:46:34 PM
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Comments
springclock said 4866 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
interesting
I really enjoy non conventional recordings....and this has a really
interesting presence to it.... cool delivery....thanks for the invite to listen
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springclock said 4866 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
interesting
I really enjoy non conventional recordings....and this has a really
interesting presence to it.... cool delivery....thanks for the invite to listen
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joeyjojo said 4866 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
thunder
You obviously have a talent with words.iwould love to hear it wth music
although it's a great piece as it is .
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teptep said 4866 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
thunder
yeah it would be nice with music but I have no instramental skills


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Alannah said 4865 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
Your voice is good .....
I would watch the levels and RED ZONE a little in spots .... as an ECHO / REVERB junkie I had no problem with that ... but I think the echo could be cut back slightly for an acapella piece .... as there is no music to blend it in with ..... you should talk with some of the people here about doing some collabs ... I KNOW there are TONS of them who I'm sure whould be more than happy to provide you with some instruments to go with your own unique instrument ! Nice !
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teptep said 4865 days ago (May 27th, 2006)
Your voice is good .....
might try that.

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screamalexz said 4865 days ago (May 28th, 2006)
stormy
the production is cool, tho makes it a little hard to understand the words. does have a kind of cool feel. maybe some background stuff to add to the storm idea.
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DeputyDoofy said 4863 days ago (May 30th, 2006)
Actually,
I think its charm is the fact that it is minimalistic. I will agree that it is hard to understand the words at time, but hey, there are plenty of commerical songs on radio that I can't understand without the printed lyrics. I like it.
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teptep said 4863 days ago (May 30th, 2006)
Actually,
you made me smile, while I know that everyone seeks praise for there work and sometimes critisizm is more needed then that praise sometimes people miss the point of musical peaces. don't get me wrong I like praise like anyone else but I am not seeking it, but it is much apreiceated and it seems you found the point to what I have done. however I still hope that someone can come along and maybe add something to it and make it abit nicer. like light or soft instraments behind it. thanks again you really did make me smile.

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said 4862 days ago (May 30th, 2006)
nice
I'd definitely like to grab this and do a remix if you'd allow me.

EE
teptep said 4862 days ago (May 30th, 2006)
nice
sure I have someone else working on it to but i sent him the wrong file


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teptep said 4862 days ago (May 30th, 2006)
nice
by accident but well sent him the right one soon after tell me if you need anything from me and I will send it

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thetiler said 4862 days ago (May 31st, 2006)
I like
the texture of your vocie, kind of reminds me of a male version of Tracy
Chatman (not sure if I spelled that right). Nice feel to this!

Way to go.
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WRG said 4862 days ago (May 31st, 2006)
thanks
nice melody, great lyrics

Thanks
William
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MissChaos said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
vocals
You know, I really think you've got great vocal intonation. Really, the
combination of the poetic lyrics and your vocal rhythm is evidence that
you've got some skillz! I think Electro Estate could do a whole lot with
this. Please keep singing!
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said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
This could work. I like what I hear. Less reverb, clearer enunciation. I
absolutely like your timing and phrasing. Good job. I might like to
collab with you on this one.
said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
Here are some suggestions for cleaning up and further developing the lyrics:

A storm is raging 'gain tonight
outside of these four walls.
Shafts of light, they pierce the night
and thunder makes its call.
and thunder makes its call.

My mind is numb, my mind it blanks
with shocks that blind my sight.
The rumbling of the big tanks,
the blunder and the fright,
the blunder and the fright.

The thunder and the thrashing,
the fury of large wings,
the rolling and the flashing,
the flood of fear it brings,
the flood of fear it brings.

Noise so loud I have to shout
to hear my buried thoughts
Mother Master calls me out
to see what it's about,
to see what it's about.

Clouds so dark they stop my eyes,
then lightning makes it white.
I cringe in fear, but realize
it's part of nature's fight.
it's part of nature's fight.

The thunder and the thrashing,
the fury of large wings,
the rolling and the flashing,
the flood of fear it brings,
the flood of fear it brings.

You stab me with a wicked tongue
You break the house we built.
Have I done ya that much wrong
to be swept away by guilt,
to be swept away by guilt?

Your scorn is raging in my ear
You said I failed my part.
I'm cast in shadow, full of fear.
The end has made its start.
The end has made its start.

The thunder and the thrashing,
the fury of large wings,
the rolling and the flashing,
the flood of fear it brings,
the flood of fear it brings.

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teptep said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
uhhhh your missing the point, it is a simple song, not ment to have stuff added, and from reading abit of your added lyrics some sound decently like they belong but some parts make no point in the music. like tank and wings.

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said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
The point is to inspire each other in different ways. I just felt that the song
could be a huge statement about warfare, whether personal warfare or
organized warfare. Sorry, I didn't mean to belittle the song you made. It is
good as it is. Oh well, maybe I should have done nothing.

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teptep said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
no no its ok, you did an excelnt job now that I have heard it and saw where you where taking it.

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said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
My adaptation of Will's song is here:
http://www.macjams.com/song/21373

I renamed it "A Storm Is Raging". Thanks, Will, for the inspiration. I got swept
up in the song.

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teptep said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
hmmms upbeat, sounds abit to happy for a storm, but it sounded good none the less.


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said 4860 days ago (June 2nd, 2006)
potential kineticism
It's raging storm, a driving wind. Whatever, it's just the way my version
evolved. Sense of urgency and all that. A wickedly fast folk ballad.

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said 4859 days ago (June 3rd, 2006)
potential kineticism
I have abandoned my adaptation and am now working on Will's original
soundtrack, adding vocal parts. It is still "a cappella" as of noon Saturday, but
I think I hear some cool guitar chords coming later this afternoon...
http://www.schletty.com/music/Thunder_and_Lightning_02.mp3

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said 4859 days ago (June 3rd, 2006)
potential kineticism
Well, I am fighting against a track that has too many echo and reverb effects
on it. Here's some additional work I did on teptep's original song. I added a
few 12-string guitar strikes and ceramic drum hits. Still needs a lot of work:
http://www.schletty.com/music/Thunder_and_Lightning_03.mp3

Teptep, I'd like to have your "dry" original vox track (no echo and reverb). Can
you send it to me?

Anyone care to take what I have so far and work with it?

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teptep said 4859 days ago (June 3rd, 2006)
potential kineticism
I looked for the orginal without the echo sound effects but I think I saved over it, so I don't have it anymore.

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said 4859 days ago (June 3rd, 2006)
potential kineticism
Did you create this with GarageBand? If so, you could send me your GB .band
file. Or, you could simply turn off all the effects and bounce a "dry" version.

Are you will to re-record your vocal?

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said 4859 days ago (June 3rd, 2006)
potential kineticism
Here is a mix with outlier's guitar added in: http://www.schletty.com/music/
Thunder_and_Lightning_04.mp3

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teptep said 4858 days ago (June 4th, 2006)
potential kineticism
I told you before, I liked the other version you created, I hope you didn't really scrap it.

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teptep said 4858 days ago (June 4th, 2006)
potential kineticism
unfortionetly I don't have that program, I use something called adobe audition. as for resinging it I could try but it won't sound the same.

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said 4858 days ago (June 4th, 2006)
potential kineticism
No, I didn't scrap it. I am trying to learn the song now. I tend to write something and rush into recording it. Then it takes me several days or weeks to really discover how the song should be played and sung. I will be posting another version of it soon. Thanks for your inspiration and thanks for letting me know you you like my wayward version of your song.

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teptep said 4858 days ago (June 4th, 2006)
potential kineticism
I have the non echoing version now, I resung it

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