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Sunfire


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Cellar

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I wrote this song a long time ago. This is my first attempt at recording on GB
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Lyrics
The sun it wants to see you,
the sun it wants to feel you,
the sun it wants to be you,
the sun it wants to burn you, hurt you.

Chorus: Sunfire grows higher inside you,
sunfire grows higher and higher,
the fire grows higher, sunfire.

The sun it wants to meet you,
the sun it wnats to hold you,
the sun it wants to beat you threw,
the sun it wants to kill me, don't let it kill you

Chorus>

The sun it wants to follow you,
the sun it wants to touch you,
the sun it wants to be in your shadow,
the sun it wants no one else to follow you.

Sunfire, it wants to burn the trees,
sunfire, it wants to burn you and me,
sunfire, don't let it hurt you please.

The sun, way up, in the sky,
the sun, it doesn't, want your guy,
the sun, it wants to take me away,
the sun, it wants to take me just for the day.

Higher chorus
Song Stats
Hits: 2937
Comments: 26
Fans: 2
Plays: 82
Downloads: 0

Uploaded: Nov 03, 2006 - 04:16:29 PM
Last Updated: Jan 31, 2007 - 07:25:49 PM Last Played: Jul 10, 2019 - 09:21:05 PM
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Hardware:
Kramer accoustic/electric guitar, me
Software:
GB
Comments
said 4672 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
Congratulations!
On your first song posted. I enjoyed this very much, the pick-up in tempo is good. You have a very nice voice!

. - Harold
Cellar said 4672 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
Thanks
glad to hear I've been heard.
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said 4672 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
welcome
to mac jams. cool tune you ever listen to hole with courtney love very similar. on the other hand your voice has a nice tone I would bring up the vocal just a bit
Cellar said 4672 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
Courtney
I used to listen to a lot of Hole and Nirvana around the time I wrote this so...ya just a wee bit influenced by them. Thanks for the input
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drakonis said 4672 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
Welcome
I like this melody, and your voice has a rich character that is very listenable. Good Guitar strumming... so, what kind of mic did you use? It sounds a little muffled, like there's some room ambience... you may want to sing a little closer to the mic, then back the gain down a little to get rid of some of the "room" sound. Did you sing/play at the same time, or do two tracks? It is often easier to do two tracks and mix later.
ttfn,
Drakonis
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Cellar said 4672 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
Macs mic
I'll be picking up an addapter so I can plug my mic into the computer. I did this on two tracks, guitar first
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Schello said 4672 days ago (November 3rd, 2006)
,-)
finally i came back young... remendME in good mood
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Cellar said 4671 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
??????
not sure what you mean,but thanks for listening
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blaky smith said 4672 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
For a first post
it' s a good post ! Welcome to MacJams and thanks to share. Good guitar and nice voice...
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Cellar said 4671 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
Thank you,
and thanks for listening
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SuicideEvolution said 4671 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
nice song
ya I need a new mic set up too...hey at least your recording quality is better than mine. Have a good day.

~Nate
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Cellar said 4671 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
Thanks
ya a proper mic is a good thing, thanks for listening
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apb said 4671 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
Nice voice ..
.. coming from Scotland I have no idea what you are singing about ..
but .. good first post. Simple effect campfire acoustic playing, like ego
it reminds me a bit of a less husky Courtney and Hole ..
production is letting you down a bit .. but I've no doubt you'll quickly
improve that in time, if you want to head that direction - but I'm no production guru - (I've been using GB v3 myself only 6 months to date). You'll find MJs a helpful place I'm sure, as I have ... welcome
to MJs!

Did you record the guitar and singing at the same time? I feel you did
this as a Gb experiment and did a "one take" - which is impressive.
So I think you know alot of things you could do to it with more time eg.
tighten guitar playing in bits (with a bit of editing), edit or swap in
a chorus bit to replace the one "the sun" line which catches you a bit out of breath/swallowing? - perhaps play the guitar first as seperate track(s), beef up chorus vocals with some harmonies or multi-tracking and have a fade out chorus ending (say).
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Cellar said 4671 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
were you watching...lol
did guitar first then went back and did vocals, but ya I was swallowing that one time....I kinda just threw this out there so I could get some input, I'm new to the whole GB and MJs thing.....any advice is good advice at this point. Thanks for your input
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thoddi said 4671 days ago (November 4th, 2006)
enjoyable
Nice to listen to your tune. You have a lovely voice. Good song:)
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Cellar said 4670 days ago (November 5th, 2006)
Thank you,
and thanks for listening
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Cellar said 4670 days ago (November 6th, 2006)
Beautiful!!
simplicity, raw, and beautiful..i only wish i could just be to the point with my work. i love it, i want more please :)
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Cellar said 4669 days ago (November 6th, 2006)
hee hee
This was my husband...he is sooooo silly
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alfalpha said 4668 days ago (November 8th, 2006)
...loverly!
...great first upload!
your voice has character & a really lovely quality....
poignant lyrics too!

Well Done!
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Cellar said 4667 days ago (November 8th, 2006)
thanks
...for listening. I appreciate all ears, and thoughts
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craft said 4667 days ago (November 8th, 2006)
...
Like the lyrics... The vocals and the guitar playing are very good... If you have some drums, bass and a second guitar playing this acoustic song will turn a great pop song... Give it a try... I dig it
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Cellar said 4667 days ago (November 8th, 2006)
thanks...
for the input....I've started to work on a "second take", drums from gb are included, as well as a second guitar provided by my husband(the_laureate)....hope you come back and listen when I've finished(this may take awhile yet)
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paxeden said 4667 days ago (November 8th, 2006)
your voice is very
candid and personal. it's very easy to keep listening to you singing...if that makes any sense, it feels like you're in the room. great tune. i could see this being backed by a thoughtful band where there is a very tension building gradual climb leading to the end.... nice.
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Cellar said 4667 days ago (November 8th, 2006)
my voice..
why thank you. I'm working on something sorta bandlike....hope you come and listen when its done....thanks for your input....every bit helps
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bud said 4583 days ago (January 31st, 2007)
Thanks for posting with the disabled
I may never have heard this otherwise. You've got a great song here and a really engaging voice. I can't believe you pulled this off without a mic - but I remember doing the same thing at first. Fun - isn't it? Looking forward to hearing more from you.
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Cellar said 4583 days ago (January 31st, 2007)
re-working
thanks for your input. I am curently re-working this song with better equipment. I hope to be finished soon. and then be on to the next one.
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