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"I'm tellin' ya' ... it was awful. See , we'd been raidin' dis here house for a couple weeks ... easy pickin's. Climb up the ivy on da wall, an' get in tru da hole in da screen. No cats in dis house, only dogs, and you know dey never bother us mice. Owner of da house leaves da dog food out on da floor!!! ... easy pickin's I tell ya.

But den one night we goes in da house da usual way ... a couple dozen of us mice all together. We wasn't in dere more den about a minute when I hear da first snap. It was my uncle Mickey who got it ... right across his neck. Den, I hears another humongous SNAP. It was my cousin, Vinny.
Marvin, Maude, Millie and Monica got it next ... right in a row.
All around me traps was goin' off and mice was bein' slaughtered.
I crawled on all fours tru da kitchen and I hears more traps goin' off.
Traps on the right of me ... traps to the left. I crawled tru a valley of death!!!!
Howard, Henry, Harvey and Humbert ... all dead.
Justin, Jerry, Jermaine, Jason .... all gone ... slaughtered.

At last I reached the patio door and ran for my life.
I tell ya da truf ... I ain't never raidin' a house again!!!!"
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Uploaded: Nov 15, 2006 - 08:58:18 PM
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SmokeyVW said 4689 days ago (November 15th, 2006)
nice track
i like the sounds you pulled together here. nice nice. the snaps work!

i like how the names start with the same letter in the groups... LOL

re synchro: oddly enough 26208 might actually work with yours... hmmm... :-)
well... maybe only in the beginning. oh well! but then... near the end it comes back together... hmmm.... nevermind
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announcer said 4689 days ago (November 16th, 2006)
Thanks smokey
This song was inspired by a true story but the names have been changed to protect the innocent.
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Vic Holman said 4688 days ago (November 16th, 2006)
always like...
how your compositions follow your stories. luckily i have a cat as big as a dog. the mice moved out of the nieghborhood, the squirrels aren't as smart.
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announcer said 4688 days ago (November 16th, 2006)
Vic thanks
for stopping by and for the comment and vote. This really was inspired by a true story. The story was told to me by the human involved however, not the mouse.
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RickB1 said 4683 days ago (November 21st, 2006)
Very smooth and clever!
Love the snaps...the composition provides the perfect arrangement for the story you posted!
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announcer said 4683 days ago (November 21st, 2006)
Thanks for stopping by and thank you for the comment. I really do appreciate it. That a person with your writing skills stops by and comments favorably is amazing and gratifying to me.
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