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dudave

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acoustic, hebrew, was recorded at home with cheap guitar and mediocre mic :)
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Lyrics
במקום לזרום אני בוחר
להתחבא, להשתכר
הכל או כלום אני אומר
אבל את מתעלמת מהכל

ושום דבר כבר לא חשוב
אני חולם עלייך שוב
כותב עלייך עוד שיר עצוב
זה לא נגמר אף פעם, כמו החול

ולא נותנת לי מקום להתקרב
הזמן עובר הצלקות עוד כאן

ולא אשאל אותך יותר
למה את בוכה
לא אבוא עוד לבקר
עדיף מבוכה
עדיף להסתגר בחדר, לנגן
אולי לשכוח אותך
לכן אני פצוע כל כך

אני סגור במעגל
ובשבילך ברירת מחדל
איך לשנות את הגורל
ולנסות לא לאבד אותך

את לא רואה בי שום דבר
אני שקוף ומיותר
מכל מילה אני נגמר
מכל תנועה שלך אני נחתך

ולא נותנת לי מקום להתקרב
הזמן עובר הצלקות עוד כאן

ולא אשאל אותך יותר
למה את בוכה
לא אבוא עוד לבקר
עדיף מבוכה
עדיף להסתגר בחדר, לנגן
אולי לשכוח אותך
לכן אני פצוע כל כך

translation:

instead of flowing i chose
to hide, to get wasted
"it's all or nothing" i say
but you just keep avoiding everything

and nothing does'nt matter anymore
i dream of you again
writing another sad song for you
it seem there's always more, like the sand

and you never let me get closer
time keeps moving, but the scars are still there

chorus:
and i won't ask you anymore
"why do you cry"
i won't come visit you no more
i'l stay with my shame
i'm better enclosed in this room
play guitar, and maybe i'l forget you
that's why i'm aching so bad

i'm traped in a circle
and for you not even a second choice
how could i change this destiny
trying not to lose you again

you don't see anything in me
invisible, unnecessary
with every word you say i die
with every move you make, another cut

and you never let me get closer
time keeps moving, but the scars are still there

chorus:
and i won't ask you anymore
"why do you cry"
i won't come visit you no more
i'l stay with my shame
i'm better enclosed in this room
play guitar, and maybe i'l forget you
that's why i'm aching so bad
Song Stats
Hits: 2007
Comments: 6
Fans: 0
Plays: 90
Downloads: 111
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Mar 20, 2007 - 08:43:42 AM
Last Updated: Mar 20, 2007 - 12:12:53 PM Last Played: Feb 05, 2019 - 05:22:43 PM
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Comments
said 4565 days ago (March 20th, 2007)
very nice
i think it could definately be re-recorded. there is a hiss from something, but...
it's a really nice song. i like the way the Hebrew comes across vocally. Of course, I am sure it's natural to you :)
It is a very emotional piece. Even though I can't understand it, your emotion makes me feel as though I have lost something
Could you post the lyrics, and maybe a translation?
dudave said 4565 days ago (March 20th, 2007)
thanx
thanx for the kind opinion, i'l deffinitly record it again sometime soon, this song has just been writen 2 days ago so i'm sure it's far from perfect as well. i wrote the lyrics in hebrew and the translation in english, it doesn't sound too great but it usualy never does with translation :) i realy hope it sounds better in hebrew!
Check out my latest song called no clew
said 4565 days ago (March 20th, 2007)
thanks...
for posting the lyrics. They are beautifully written. And very personal.
I think it's great, powerful song. Thanks for sharing, and welcome to MacJams!
I look forward to hearing more of your music.
dudave said 4565 days ago (March 20th, 2007)
thanx again
i apritiate it
Check out my latest song called no clew
Scott Carmichael said 4565 days ago (March 20th, 2007)
In spite of the
"cheap guitar and mediocre mic" there is something about this that really works, and it has to do with your performance... remember a great guitar and mike can't fix a poor performance... your singing is passionate and excellent... and even though I don't know hebrew, you have comunicated to me splendedly...

welcome to MJ
Check out my latest song called He Has Passed this Way
dudave said 4565 days ago (March 20th, 2007)
thanx
thanx a lot scott, MJ realy seem like
the place i'v been looking for!
Check out my latest song called no clew
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