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michael2

 Genre: Ambient
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it's totally unfinished, kind of ambient, psych,... i was going for a sigur ros sort of vibe; and then got lost. there are vocals on here, but not really eq'ed; just plopped down in the mix. it's the same vocal passage cut and pasted around the "song." there is like 7 and 1/2 minutes of stuff to fool around with.

if interested, let me know and i'll send the file. alternately, just let me know if it's a big waste of time (i can't tell anymore). it's wierd, i usually just improvise when making up songs, and this one is going nowhere for me.

(edit) actually here is a link for the GB file if anyone wants to download it and have a go at it. just let me know when you post it and please put a link back to the original so people can compare the 2:
http://www.mediafire.com/?8knmmymqw1m
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Hits: 3278
Comments: 8
Fans: 1
Plays: 144
Downloads: 159
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Apr 18, 2007 - 08:27:50 PM
Last Updated: May 01, 2007 - 10:15:19 PM Last Played: May 27, 2019 - 11:03:19 AM
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dajama said 4450 days ago (April 18th, 2007)
I've listened twice...
...both times with the goal of figuring out what could be "done to it" to make it better, and both times I got lost in it, letting it play while I let my mind wander (where it will go?). I can't help but wonder (as I listen to it for the third time...) if, perhaps, it ain't broke, so why try to fix it? you could certainly do a Sigur Ros vibe on it - bringing in some wicked Floyd-like drums and dramatic guitar, maybe? or some chord change that will make your head spin? - but maybe it just needs small tweaks...But, hey, what do I know? I like this. Unfinished or not - it's been downloaded. Smooth.
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Reinholt56 said 4449 days ago (April 19th, 2007)
I agree with dajama......
I agree with dajama about the drums and guitar.

Apart from that the mix is a good Ambient track though just probably drifting but that, from an Ambient point of view, is fine.

What do you, as the creator, think is missing??

Paul.
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said 4437 days ago (May 1st, 2007)
I like it
I might just give it a go....

:-)

b
michael2 said 4437 days ago (May 1st, 2007)
cool
want me to up the files for you?
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said 4437 days ago (May 1st, 2007)
Why not?
;-)
said 4437 days ago (May 1st, 2007)
Where
are you upping the files to?
Mystified said 4418 days ago (May 20th, 2007)
had to stop by...
...and listen to the original track that Bryn worked from for his recent upload.

Very cool track! I can see why he took you up on the invitation :)
(and I was inspired to add vox to his remix, too!)

I like the 'removed,' sort of isolated feeling of this. Serene, yet solitary. Searching.

Nice...



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Heightened said 4205 days ago (December 18th, 2007)
Sorry
I like it just as it is. Feels minimalist - which I like.
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I'm a guy who never wanted to do anything but play music. I grew up with classic rock and prog rock before discovering punk and the new york dolls once I got to high school. As i got a little older (and less angry), I developed a love of ... [see more]

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Ambient music is a loosely defined musical genre that incorporates elements of a number of different styles - including jazz, electronic music, new age, rock and roll, modern classical music, reggae, traditional, world and even noise.

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