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The Dreaming Fool (vocals)


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ok... here's my first attempt at recording some vocals. too bad they're mine... haha. be nice!

what i'm TRYING to sing about is how the time you have here is valuable, and that we all shouldn't be wasting it with anger and hatred.

i welcome anyone to re-record my vocals. i would really like hear the song as it is in my head!

mahalo for checking it out!
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Lyrics
When it's gone
You tell yourself you were'nt ever wrong
And when it's gone
Your weighted heart remains until the dawn

Wasted
You waste it
On hatred
Wasted
You waste it
On hatred

When it's gone
The feeling in your head is oh so wrong
And when it's gone
Your broken heart, it strains to beat along

Wasted
You waste it
On hatred
Wasted
You waste it
On hatred

The glaring truth has been revealed
The ticking clock is slowing down
There is no time to do it wrong
Your broken heart it sings this song
Song Stats
Hits: 2580
Comments: 6
Fans: 2
Plays: 67
Downloads: 108
Votes: 4
Uploaded: May 18, 2007 - 03:38:04 PM
Last Updated: May 18, 2007 - 03:46:31 PM Last Played: Oct 17, 2018 - 01:46:50 AM
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Apple Powerbook G4 1.67ghz
Software:
Apple Garageband
Comments
michael2 said 4201 days ago (May 18th, 2007)
nice song
i love the changes between the verse and chorus. that's an awesome change. it's like you get to the chorus and it changes from super happy, to "why are you not happy damn it? be happy."

if i could suggest anything: make the chorus heavier still. and for some reason i keep imagining a banjo arpeggiating the chords in the verse. kind of reminds me of mercury rev or the flaming lips. those vocals don't need to be re-done IMHO. really great job, i always like your stuff.
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Vic Holman said 4201 days ago (May 19th, 2007)
a lot of cool stuff here
the verse section is great. maybe boost the vocal a bit. your voice ain't bad at all. i see what michael2 is saying here, the chorus should be more stronger, a lot like how you treated the ending section of the song.

But like i said a lot of cool stuff going on!


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Day For Night said 4201 days ago (May 19th, 2007)
This is great!
Love the whole feel of this track...yep it does have a slight Flaming Lips feel (no bad thing!!!). Vocals are great - what were you worried about?
FAB
Steve
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leapfrogunicorns said 4200 days ago (May 19th, 2007)
appreciate...
...all the feedback. i'll try n bump up the verse vocals... prolly fix some flat parts, too. mahalo again!
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Godchaser said 4200 days ago (May 20th, 2007)
Cool Tune
This is very cool - vocals are done well - just need a bit of a bump in the verses - great mood & vibe trans between verse and chorus - nice production, writting and musical approach - it's all good!

-Godchaser
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bonnieprincejohnny said 4178 days ago (June 10th, 2007)
oh aye
Quality.
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