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Don't Come Too Close


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djdrshaman

 Genre: Rock

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a rockin tune (retro punk/classic rock) with a caveat- an incessant bass guitar hook with a mad punk guitar solo in the middle section
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Lyrics
Let me crawl into your soul
Piece you to a whole
Heat you up with Promethean fire
Fill you with desire so deep
It can never be filled.

Don’t come too close
Or you may get cut
Don’t come too close
Or the weight of your presence
May crush what we have
Don’t come too close
The edges of my heart
Are sharp and brittle like broken glass.

Let me dance on the wings of your desire
Let me creep into your dreams
Nothing’s as it seems
Slide into your emptiness
Smother you with promises
Fill you with desire so deep
You’ll never be satisfied.

What will you do?
Song Stats
Hits: 2738
Comments: 14
Fans: 3
Plays: 88
Downloads: 7
Votes: 3
Uploaded: Aug 06, 2007 - 09:31:37 PM
Last Updated: Aug 07, 2007 - 12:05:35 AM Last Played: Apr 30, 2019 - 08:10:32 PM
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said 4340 days ago (August 6th, 2007)
now now
A little more in the descrition department! Love the bass lines guitar and singing realy cool rock and roll ! diggin it !
djdrshaman said 4340 days ago (August 7th, 2007)
egob
tried to fill in a little more 4 you - yeah this tune just rocks me out- i am glad you rocked to it too!

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said 4340 days ago (August 7th, 2007)
kick it
great thumping drive on this one... bass line anchors the track, and the dirty, ace frehley guitars are a nice suprise....
djdrshaman said 4340 days ago (August 7th, 2007)
RAD
thx for the comments - yah the dirty guitars lend the track a real grunge atmo - and yah it thumps - i wish i could sell a song like this to the right type of artist - the performance I feel captures the concept pretty well- and it's a mischievous romp of a piece.

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said 4340 days ago (August 7th, 2007)
Great !
what a killer tone is that ??, your vocal really fits the music, the solo in the middle skilled very much and right in the place, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK IN THIS STYLE.
Welcome To MJ !!

Take Care
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echoroom said 4339 days ago (August 7th, 2007)
Mad urgency
This songs got somewhere to go .. and now! A kickin' lil' number, nice rock vox ... nice work.

Steve
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djdrshaman said 4339 days ago (August 7th, 2007)
thx buddy
for the comment - where can this song go, may i ask? help me out here... :)

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DOCTORBIZARRE said 4339 days ago (August 7th, 2007)
NOICE BEAST
Has a classic Cult feel! I would throw some guitar behind that solo!
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apb said 4335 days ago (August 12th, 2007)
Retro feel ..

.. for sure. Great performances: singing, guitars etc.
Was quite punky .. but still the metal end of the
rock genre .. IMO grunge would have more groove/rockn'roll swing. The Ace Frehley-esque solo was quite a surprise, in this context, but cool all the
same. The rhymes in the lyrics are a bit cheesy to be honest (IMO)... though I like 'slide into .. " and the
"smother you .." lines.

Good mix - would agree with the Dr. .. a second guitar track backing up the solo wouldn't go amiss.

Thanks for sharing.
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djdrshaman said 4334 days ago (August 12th, 2007)
thx apb
enjoyed the tour of ur studio! yeah mad guitar would kick 4 sure- but this piece was recorded as a four-piece- vocal/organ, guitar, bass, and drums - so i wanted to maintain that small ensemble real rock band feeling- i listened to a lot of jim morrison when i did this vocal and also read a lof his poetry - "promises" and "emptiness" r themes that r rife in the music of the doors- to whom i credit my primary inspiration.

thank u for commenting

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racerat said 4303 days ago (September 13th, 2007)
1st
So, this is the first song I've heard of yours DJ. Sonny Jim put me onto you. Said you were an experimental man of considerable talent. Well, and this song certainly shows it. Can't wait to listen to more of your stuff. This is a rockin' keeper. GREAT intro bassline. 0->60 in no time flat.
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djdrshaman said 4299 days ago (September 16th, 2007)
thx racerat
i appreciate sonnj's support very much- so glad u r exploring my catalogue - and glad u rocked out to this one- am looking forward to rocking out on your tunes as well - which ones to start with? u seem to know your rock pretty well

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Sir Bass said 4203 days ago (December 21st, 2007)
online
stopping by, nice lyrics.
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Char said 2381 days ago (December 16th, 2012)
Yup.
You deliver wherever you advertize. Thanks.
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