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Original song, written in 06, I still toy with redoing the vocals from time to time, and adding real drums. The drum track that you hear was initally something I threw together just to get the song structure nailed down, but I liked the way they sounded, so I added the cymbals and left it as is.
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i still believe in this
i know your emotions were real
i meant those words i said
now what do i do
to prove that i'm here

you still set me on fire
you still burn me with desire
you can't walk away from this
because you still want a part of me

your fear is natural
let go for once and trust your heart
i gave my all to you
i'm not a fleeting thought
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Uploaded: Feb 04, 2008 - 11:24:31 AM
Last Updated: Feb 03, 2008 - 03:02:18 AM Last Played: Jun 25, 2019 - 03:48:21 AM
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lavalamp said 4181 days ago (February 4th, 2008)
At the first note
When I heard the first note I knew this was good. Great song and pretty well-produced. I mean the drums are good and real enough. I guess you could use a few fills, but that would be knit-picking. Very good song!
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ajnorth said 4181 days ago (February 4th, 2008)
This is brilliant! I was hooked from the first note! good job man. When the guitar first came in at the begining I thought it sounded a bit Mark Knofler. I think the vocals could benefit from a remix, as some of the backing vocals in the chorus are louder than the main vox. But the actually song is first class.
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said 4181 days ago (February 4th, 2008)
impressive piece of songwriting and all around delivery. Love the tone on your axe, sweet pickin'. Welcome to MacJams, we'll all look forward to some more of your work, thanks for sharing it with us.

. - Harold
Feter said 4181 days ago (February 4th, 2008)
On Fire
Ginat guitar work ...the bass boomin and range
is top notch ..I can see you worked hard on the
vocaling and harmonies ..great song thnx
for sharin !!!!
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VicDiesel said 4181 days ago (February 4th, 2008)
Very tasteful
Really nice guitar work.

The mix has some rough edges (the background vox, as mentioned above) but the whole thing is a pleasure to listen to.
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michael2 said 4180 days ago (February 5th, 2008)
really nice song. i agree with everyone else: the drums are fine, but you could do with a remix on the vox. they are getting a little buried. IMHO you might want them a little dryer too, there seems to be a chorus or something on them; your voice is nice enough to warrant the loud, proud and just a touch of reverb approach. great job.
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echoroom said 4180 days ago (February 6th, 2008)
Great guitar work and a nice widescreen feel. The vox are lovely and delicate. Agree the vox need some mix work, but its a great chorus, man.

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rsorensen said 4177 days ago (February 8th, 2008)
love the guitar work in this one. great song.
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SystematicFailure said 4176 days ago (February 9th, 2008)
youre a
great player! cool song
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