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YOUR TENDER SOUL


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Barretok

 Genre: Acoustic Rock

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This is a song about a real life event with a few liberties. It is acoustic and it's a bluesy kind of rock or a rocky kind of blues. In any case try to relax and enjoy.
Thanks,
Bernardo
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Lyrics
YOUR TENDER SOUL
By© Bernardo Barreto

Well you called me from the Big Corporation
Chased by the monsters of your imagination
Under your desk

Later we met in a Dominican Restaurant
Your beauty hid so well
The torments of your mind.

I took you home and we turned on the TV
We made sweet love and you fell asleep
Under the lights of your Christmas tree.

I touched your hair and saw your restless mind
Struggling with the demons in your dreams
In your dreams.

(solo)

Your tender soul was wide open
Like the wounds of Jesus Christ
Just like the wounds of Jesus Christ

So the next day we went to church
I saw you walking to the altar
Receiving the communion pure as a child
Just like a baby child.

Late that night I felt the sweet taste of your lips
While we said goodbye.
And I took that taste

With the night and the snow across the park.

With your tender soul.

Song Stats
Hits: 3041
Comments: 17
Fans: 10
Plays: 64
Downloads: 137
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Feb 21, 2008 - 08:27:30 AM
Last Updated: Feb 21, 2008 - 08:27:30 AM Last Played: Jun 30, 2019 - 03:02:25 PM
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Comments
said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
Great
I really like your vocals... Good guitar... And it's relaxing.... And that percussion and rhythm section, is played and mixed good and wide.... Great blues...


said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
Very nice
I really love what u are doing... U are very awesome with the blues.

Cheers
---
Kenta
Barretok said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
Thank you
Thank you guys, I'm glad you liked it. I respect both of your opinions.
B
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dirigent said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
Excellent B
I like the rhythm in the guitar and the relaxed and light percussion. Superb mix and as always great singing. Bravo! very nice sologuitar-sound!!
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said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
even u're vox
sounds accoustic here...Nice track and great lyrics again brotha. With everythin' u do there's a big stamp of your taste, feel and rythm. Enjoyed Bernardo...!
Barretok said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
THANK YOU...
My friends, really appreciate your comments.
B
Check out my latest song called MASKED PUPPETEERS
Feter said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
YOUR TENDER SOUL
emmm I m still think you are a star in disguise ...
how on earth you can let this machine sounds like
a tight band like this ? this is impressive !
Deep Bow !!
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said 4165 days ago (February 21st, 2008)
Excellent
Song B, from the first note to the last, I especially like the lyrics and the acoustic approach...Bravo
lupiroz said 4165 days ago (February 22nd, 2008)
This is one of my favourite tunes
of your recent production; I like the acoustic mood of course but also the percussion setup and panning and the pleasant flowing of the whole piece....let's call it: TopOfThePops blues!
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KCsGROOVE said 4164 days ago (February 22nd, 2008)
fine guitar!
Like the guitar in this one!
cool easy swing and great slide!
KC
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ledebutant said 4164 days ago (February 22nd, 2008)
Lyrics
Wow, this is terrifically written. There are so many really incredibly evocative, specific lines. I love "we made sweet love and you fell asleep under the lights of your Christmas tree" and "I took that taste with the night and the snow across the park," especially.

Through my speakers, it sounds as though there's an effect on the vocals that's making them sound a little hard and cold compared to the rest of the track and I'm not fond of that, but it's the only thing I'm not a big fan of here. The rest of the production is stellar, especially the drums and percussion.

I'm a sucker for the slide guitar and you used it really tastefully here.

Thanks!
saymme said 4164 days ago (February 22nd, 2008)
.. ( :
this makes me smile...its very nice only heard it once yet so I can't say that much as the songs always grow on me if I like'm - I like this ! Your voice singing-vocals?thats the name in English isn't it..(?) are so different - special : ) 8 ) like the lyrics alot...once in my life I could lie about just about anything...not any more changed some years ago.. thank God ! Lies keep Ya' prisoner ..not the other way round.. although ya' try to convince yourself of it... if U see what I mean ? Real interesting song I've only heard very little of Your Music.. much obliged ! tx lena
said 4164 days ago (February 22nd, 2008)
Yet again!!

Hi 'Sir' Barretok.

Yes this is also great I love your lyrics and here is some of my favourite ones too however they are all good Your singing voice is my most favourite though.

I took you home and we turned on the TV
We made sweet love and you fell asleep
Under the lights of your Christmas tree.

I can just imagine this scene ooh la la la... lol

Excellent.


Peace
Dee x
that80sboy said 4164 days ago (February 22nd, 2008)
gimeee a dose....
....of them "b"lues!! laying it down good here B!
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davisamerica2 said 4164 days ago (February 22nd, 2008)
I relaxed and I enjoyed
Great guitar. Great lyrics. Great blues! Terry
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Bob6stringer said 4163 days ago (February 23rd, 2008)
Crank it up, man!
Lovin' that fretwork! I can see the ghost of Hemingway spying the narrator's life (or yours?) from across the cafe, stealing inspiration from your stories, then turning them into journalism-ese and cashing in. Better if YOU cash in on your musical smarts, though. Good to visit you in a new place (as you know I'm a post iC-crash newbie here.)
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Heightened said 4150 days ago (March 7th, 2008)
This one got
my tail a waging! And those bongos are to die for!
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Name: Bernardo Barreto
Location: New York City NY United States
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I was born in Lima Peru but I have been living in New York since 1984, It's my second home. I am a visual artist. Painting, Illustration, Photography and Underground Comix. But music is my passion. Ever since I remember, songs have had a profound ef... [see more]

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