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Rain-Revised


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Cellar

 Genre: Acoustic

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This is a collaboration remix version of Rain /w the_laureate
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Lyrics
You tell me that I'm a good friend, just like everyone always does.
I've been told that I need someone who appreciates me, but no one ever does.

Ch-I think I lie to myself, and pretend that someones out there, waiting for me in the rain.

I hear all the lies, just like everyone always does.
I beg for everyone to stop the storytelling, but no one ever does.

Ch

I'm sick of being alone, just like everyone always does.
You don't think that I realize I'm being used, but no one ever does

Ch+
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Uploaded: Feb 26, 2008 - 10:38:35 AM
Last Updated: Feb 26, 2008 - 10:38:35 AM Last Played: Apr 30, 2019 - 07:46:04 PM
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Hardware:
Yamaha Acoustic f-340bl
Crappy Mic powered by a Yamaha mt1x
Fender Stratocaster
Software:
Garage Band
Comments
drakonis said 4223 days ago (February 26th, 2008)
better...
But with your nice singing voice, you really need a better microphone :-) The guitar recording is a little better, but still sort of muffled. One trick to try is to DUPLICATE the guitar track, copy the recording to the second track, and pan each track far to the right ( 40) and left (-40), and put a little bass & treble boost on each of them, and drop their volume a bit... this will get the guitar "out of the way" of your vocals.

Perhaps the echoes and panning back and forth on your vocals are also making it a little harder to understand the lyrics... I like the effects, but they are a little too loud... maybe soften the echo a little, and boost your vocal track so it is a little louder compared to the guitar part (I liked the electric lead in the middle too.)

The final echo on your last word "Rain rain rain..." is nice.

Definitely a song worth working on more and getting a good recording of.

ttfn,
Drakonis
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Cellar said 4223 days ago (February 26th, 2008)
I appreciate the input...
The other thing I need is a proper studio. My living room has horrible acoustics.
Check out my latest song called Rain-Revised
Godchaser said 4223 days ago (February 26th, 2008)
Love it as much...
the original version.Very,very good tune.Love your vocal work and subject matter.

Blessings,
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said 4223 days ago (February 26th, 2008)
Great
A great song..... Good sound on the vocals... And the guitars is also great... I like it a lot... Thanks for making this collab.... And sharing it....
thetiler said 4221 days ago (February 28th, 2008)
Enjoyed
that singing and the background helped to. Your voice reminds me of Fleetwood Mac's female singer.

Thanks for sharing.
Again, really cool singing!
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