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This song is originally written as a poem and evolved into a song. This was dedicated to my wife and was part of our wedding album. It was recorded with stocking as pop filter and as with my previous composition, it was recorded in our laundry room. Hope you will like it.
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Live Forever
(Dream is Not Over)

Verse 1
Thinking of times
When we first had met
I never thought
You can make my heart beat
The things that I longed
You gave it all
You are the one who can make me strong

And we will be together
You’re always with me
When times that I’m lonely
And we will live forever
Our love will lead us
Cause we always care

Verse 2
I can’t deny that I made mistakes
You feel sometimes sad
But I always regret
Even I’m weak
You are always there
To lend a hand
To make things right

The times get rough
When you are afar
My vision seems
So dim I feel quite sad
But I always believe
That we can make it
The dream is not over
Cause we always care

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Uploaded: May 30, 2008 - 07:44:43 AM
Last Updated: Jun 04, 2008 - 07:37:04 PM Last Played: Feb 15, 2019 - 11:50:37 AM
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8piscean8 said 3950 days ago (May 30th, 2008)
I really like the guitar and the cricket noises. The clave is a great addition also. It would be nice to hear some background vocals. One thing I didn't like was that the kick was mostly in the right channel and the snare was mostly in the left channel. Usually you want the kick in the middle and the snare slightly off to one side. Overall this was a great laid back tune!
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Moviz said 3949 days ago (May 30th, 2008)
Nice song
and the instrumentation is very good.... the lyrics too. Your singing is good also, but need quite a bit more volume as it still quite low in the mix, cheers M
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dajama said 3949 days ago (May 30th, 2008)
Very nice song
The lyrics are great - nicely written, and a great sentiment. I like the guitar sound (although I would agree with Moviz that the volume could be louder) and the drums sound good (again I'd agree with 8piscean8 about the panning of the drums). Very abrupt ending, too - I'd let the final note ring out. This is a nice song. I'm looking forward to checking out the rest of your music. Nicely done. Peace.
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