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Doadars Uncle

 Genre: Acoustic

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Just here expressing myself... again.

Hope you enjoy!

Peace!
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Lyrics
You thought you could test
Me and that
You knew what was best for me
But I
Don't think I'll fit
In your
Big plan that's it
And the wind
Blow me your
Sunshine

I know that you're good
I'm still here
You still do good for me
But please
Don't make me fit
In your
Big plan that's it
And the wind
Blow me your
Sunshine

And I know
Yeah, I know
I'm not exactly right

Don't blame me
Please don't blame me
If I put up a fight

I'm no Star
But my heart is
burning bright

Send the wind
Blow me your
Sunshine
Song Stats
Hits: 3418
Comments: 11
Fans: 12
Plays: 131
Downloads: 108
Votes: 9
Uploaded: Aug 05, 2008 - 09:07:27 PM
Last Updated: Aug 05, 2008 - 09:07:27 PM Last Played: Jun 08, 2019 - 11:35:30 AM
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Comments
mowguy3 said 4030 days ago (August 6th, 2008)
Star
Keep expressing yourself,"Im no star but my heart is burning bright" I think this is the perfect line for this tune. Some soft guitar,crisp and easy. My two cents. I just wish the vocals were a little cleaner. Nice job!
Thanks and be well, Russ
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Doadars Uncle said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
Hey Russ!
Thanks for your input. If I like a tune, eventually I readdress it.

I'm glad you picked up that line in the lyrics. I think it might be the most real line here!

Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
Skean said 4030 days ago (August 6th, 2008)
Lovely piece
Hey! my friend the only thing I can say is this I LOVE WHAT you have done it filed my heart with joy.

Take care
---
Kenta
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Doadars Uncle said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
Thank You Kenta!
Most excellent person! You've made my evening!

Peace,
Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
egobandit said 4030 days ago (August 6th, 2008)
Beautiful
But sad I wan t to download this but Im on my PC when I get to my mac Ill do that . This song touched me and the words are real sounds like a stuggle with someone you love, or it also could be a spiritual struggle either way a great song
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Doadars Uncle said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
You're kind
I think you're right! It could be either. I'm glad it spoke to you.

Peace,
Doug
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lengold said 4030 days ago (August 6th, 2008)
Lovely and
unfussy heartfelt song. I love your understated performance on this.
Cheers
Len


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Doadars Uncle said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
Hey Len!
Your comment is not lightly taken.

Thank you,
Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
peacepiano said 4030 days ago (August 6th, 2008)
Song
Very expressive. Has a coffee house live performance feel to it. Enjoyed!

Thanks
Bill
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Doadars Uncle said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
Hey There Bill
Thanks for stopping. Hey, just enjoyed your latest bluesy thing!

Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
jiguma said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
Great sound Doug
This is the best sound I've heard from you I think. Lovely writing and performance. A few minor nits - there are some plosives that cause a little distraction, and I'd look at moving that LH acoustic a little further in towards the centre - I'm really searching for nits here. Harmonies are rich and warm. I really like this - I think you've outdone yourself here.
Cheers,
Neil
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Doadars Uncle said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
Neil!
Your comments are so generous! You must have figured out my angle pretty well. I appreciate it.

I will more than likely address this one again.

In the meantime, thanks for the sunshine!

Peace,
Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
magnatone said 4028 days ago (August 8th, 2008)
Star
wow - this is so excellent! Gorgeous harmonies, really great work!
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Doadars Uncle said 4024 days ago (August 12th, 2008)
Hi Karen!
Happy for your visit! The harmonies were fun and a bit more than the groaning that I usually come up with!
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Alannah said 4027 days ago (August 9th, 2008)
I like it .....
..l but would agree with some of the earlier comments .. that the mixing itself could use a little clarification .... the harmonies work well ... but seem mixed in too deeply ..... losing some of the clarification of the main vocal .... and also lose the integrity of the harmony .... its all in the MIXING .... ( of which I lack skills ... so my advice on how to fix such things lacks ...) .... but great lovely tune ... would TRULY benefit from the mixing expertise of the big guns here who are willing to offer the tips .....
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Doadars Uncle said 4024 days ago (August 12th, 2008)
Hey There Alannah
Thanks for the great advice!I'm glad you like the tune! I'll let you know if there is a remix!

Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
Feter said 4027 days ago (August 9th, 2008)
Star
Classical ...what a song my friend ..sinmple ??no
deep , thoughtfull YES ...the harmonies just all
into 70s folkie thangs ...I LOVE IT ..thnx alot for
sharin !!!!
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Doadars Uncle said 4024 days ago (August 12th, 2008)
Feter!
Welcome back! Glad you spent time to visit!

Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
composerclark said 4027 days ago (August 9th, 2008)
Expressive
Expressing yourself is right! This is really expressive; just raw emotion coming through when you sing. And your voice is sounding great; I hear shades of Robert Plant. Guitar sounds great too; whole thing sounds great!
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Doadars Uncle said 4024 days ago (August 12th, 2008)
Clark!
I'm always happy when you visit! Robert Plant is a fun comparison! Happy you like it!

Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
Marastique said 4014 days ago (August 23rd, 2008)
Excellent ..
.. "back to basics" song Doug. Lyrics are top shelf and the straight forard melody and treatment are very good.

I agree with the comments about the mix - worth a second look I think (for what that's worth).


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Doadars Uncle said 4010 days ago (August 26th, 2008)
Thanks!
Thanks for swinging by and commenting! That's what it's all about, anyhow.

I'll let you know when I rework it.

Doug
Check out my latest song called Don't Leave (remix)
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